Secret Addmirers

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    Some of this I actually left on my crush's locker last February. He's my ex-boyfriend now. 

    Secret Addmirers

    You know who
    Loves Y-O-U
    With love from an unknown name
    Who could it be who's to blame?
    Is it you, you, you, or you?
    PLEASE TELL ME WHO!!
    I have a crush on you
    But you don't know who to turn to
    There's a hundred people it could be
    You'll never guess it's me
    You seem confused
    Do you feel used?
    I'll give you 3 hints to who it'll be
    It's him, her or me
    You still seem unsure
    Do you want to know the cure?
    So I'll narrow it down for you
    It's between us two
    No more hints
    Can you see my rosey tints?
    Congrats you got it right
    A movie tonight?
    See you then
    My brand new boyfriend

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    Sydney commented on Secret Addmirers

    02-09-2010

    this is really good. lol i like the way that the characters seem to flirt a bit and finding out the mystery of who has a crush on who. keep on writing.

    redbloodink commented on Secret Addmirers

    02-09-2010

    well written about a bf that is unsure and yourself too.... good luck.... red

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