The Sweetest Addictions

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The Sweetest Addictions

Call me an alcoholic
Call me a junkie
Say I'm obsessed
And I won't say I disagree

I'm hooked on the best kinda drug
Babe I'm stuck on you
Oh I'm addicted to your love
And there's nothing I can do

Backwoods boy
Lil' country chick
Like it was planned that way
God's own little pick

I am obsessive
I am consumed
I am falling
Falling madly in love with you

Everyday another blessing
Every date another answered prayer. 
Every kiss another promise 
That you'll always be there

The adopted,
The abused,
The abandoned, 
The over used

Something in my head just snaps 
My addiction shoots up ten fold 
When I meet your lips 
Or your hands take me hold 

I've never felt better 
Never a more perfect bliss
Than when I'm with you 
And sparks fly from our kiss

I love your hands
What your hands can do to me 
But above all
Above all other's I love that you love me

I was broken and lonely 
Abused and done
Then I was sent an angel
I'd say the battle's been won 

Call me an alcoholic
Call me a junkie
Say I'm obsessed
It's just what you do to me

Hurt and lonely
Forever changed by your affection
This will never be better
My life's turned a new dirrection

Call it as you wish
But I'm drunk on your kiss

I can't remember what things were like
I can't bear to think how it'd be
Won't even dwell on things
Without you here next to me

I'm addicted to your kiss
I'm high off your smile
I'm hooked on your hands
Mind if I keep you 'round for a while?

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Crush commented on The Sweetest Addictions

09-24-2012

this is such a country song. if i could play guitar i would love to write the music. well done and congrats !

TheLastCowboy commented on The Sweetest Addictions

09-17-2012

Wow, what an awesome way to explain your desire for some one!!!! Great writing and what a great example for us all!!! Without a doubt, a perfect 10 in my book!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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