Did I

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  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

Did I

You watched us grow
From small children,
To young adults.
You gave us wings
To spread and maybe
Someday fly away,
And leave the nest.
I wonder though sometimes,
Momma did I trun out
The way you hoped I would?
I know there were times
You would lay awake at night,
And then cry yourself to sleep.
I am so so sorry for the pain,
That I caused you back then,
I want you to know
Now that I have made,
My mistakes;
My soul will now go
Where you always preyed
It would go.
Momma can you tell me
Did I trun out the way
You hoped I would?
I dont know that I ever told you this,
But Momma you are my hero,
Your so strong and brave,
You have fought so hard
And you never once complained,
Even when the world threw
You lemmons,
You just simply made lemonaide
Oh Momma I Love You so much
Will you let me know
Please just tell me
Did I

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kittylilly commented on Did I

08-18-2011

this is a great poem, at times i want to ask my mother thoses questions but i could never ask them to her...i think of her as my hero since i was lil and at times i wonder if i should.....couple times i almost lost her...my heart will spilt into two if i lose her

Worthless commented on Did I

05-14-2011

No I didn't, I lived to long..

Redhead505 commented on Did I

03-22-2011

Lovely and a question I think we all ask at some point in our lives. Check spelling carefully, but other than that this poem is very emotionally evocative.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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