Thinking Of You


  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

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I love you MOM and I miss you!!!!

Thinking Of You

I relized today that in 12 days
You will have been gone for 6 long month!
I'm thinking of you right now,
It seems like every min of everyday.
I love you so so much,
Tomarrow is a big big day,
Somehow I thought you'd be here,
I'm so so scared see i read a letter
And I'm thinking of you.
I always thought you would be holding my hand
Letting me lean on you!
God called you home on a Sunday,
I remember how sad
Yet happy we were for you,
Now all I seem to do any more,
Is think of you.
I hear your laugh oh how i miss that!
At time i think I smell your purfume,
I guess thats just your way of telling me
You're still hear in my heart!
Today I find myself thiking of you.

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EyemMatt commented on Thinking Of You


Scares was supposed to be SCARS. Sorry, I never won any spelling bee's when I was a kid... Also, I missed the fact that you were speaking about your mom. You mom is still with you, looking over you. She will never leave you. From the glory of heaven she walks with relatives that have long ago passed over and they are there. They feel no more sadness or anger, as there is none at our true home. And so they hope that through your faith you find peace in knowing that this is only 'goodbye' for now. Keep your head up, and try to smile. keep on writing, and keep saying your prayers.

EyemMatt commented on Thinking Of You


The loss of someone special is one of the most difficult parts of life. Keep close to heart the memories you two shared, and of the promises God gave us of eternal salvation. For that is where your friend of yours is now, watching...waiting. You're friend doesn't want you to feel such sadness as they no longer feel any. They want you to enjoy your life, and live it to the fullest. We all have our scares of life, that is a part of life, though some scares are self inflicted. Keep the Lord close to your heart that He may heal all of those scares with His everlasting mercy, forgiveness, and love. Good luck to you my friend, and God bless you as you have blessed so many through your writings.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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