No Ones Sees


  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

No Ones Sees

How can it be that no one sees
me as I am and not who I am?
How can it be that no one knows
that I am lost and trying to be found
How can it be that no one sees
how hurt inside I am
I cry myself to sleep @ night
everyone is here but no one sees
the tears that fall
I am strong but am I that strong really??
I try to hide my fear
now im afraid that it all shows.
How can it be that no one sees
sees that more is in store
then meets the eye
wicked is here and no one sees
maybe we are just blinde and
we all pretend to be ablivious
to the ovious.
How is it that no one sees
whats right in front of them
till its gone.
Please open youe eyes and sees
what is around.
How is it that no one sees??

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rebecca14 commented on No Ones Sees


i kno how you feel i live in a big family and its like no one understands



same :/

Morris commented on No Ones Sees


Most people see what they want you to be not what you are thenm they are upset because you don't meet their expectations.



i know :/

Tarlton009 commented on No Ones Sees


very good, and I can relate to the way you are feeling, I have felt the same way as if I were invisible to the world, but even when the rest of the world does not see and does not seem to care, you are not alone. I don't know your faith and I am not trying to preach or push you to believe something that you don't from my personal experiences with feeling invisible I know that times can get rocky, and it is times like that when I am glade I have a solid rock to stand on, that is the Solid rock, which is of course my savior Jesus, for he promised to never leave us nor forsake us as long as we believe and are willing to call out to him. please forgive me if my words offend you in anyway, my only intention is to try to bring hope and maybe some comfort to you. great work though, keep up the good work.



thank you(:



sorry commented on the wrong thing



Your words do not offend me at all the one thing my mom always taught me was to have faith and as that faith grows you will start to believe and yes i do believe with all of my soul. My parents use to drive ambulance for the area i am from and over the years i have seen things that make me know that God is up there watching over us and guiding us thank you for your comment.

Worthless commented on No Ones Sees


yup... invisible we are to human contact and care...

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

wiskeygirl5090’s Poems (76)

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