Im Nothing

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    Im Nothing

     What is this fear I feel
    Why cant I sleep at night.
    He took away my life.
    I use to have dignity and pride
    Now im nothing and its
    All my fault.
    He called my name
    I thought it was my friend
    God I was so wrong
    He grabed my right arm
    I sherked I knew what was
    Going to happen.
    I trie to think of ways
    To leave, but whtever I tried
    He'd just drag me farther
    Down that blackend hallway
    He took me to the very back door,
    He opend it up and pushed me inside.
    What is this fear I feel
    Why cant I sleep at night
    He took away my life
    I use to have dignity and pride
    Now im othing and its
    All my fault.

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    combatrider commented on Im Nothing

    01-18-2012

    I must say I was not prepared for that, it came from one direction and then another. I liked it. By nature I look for corrections and changes of all works in progress. Not your fault.
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    am2anangel commented on Im Nothing

    12-07-2011

    This is a very sad write. I hope it's not true. Never feel you're to blame for anothers actions. A great write tragic in the telling. well done. -Tonya
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    wiskeygirl5090

    12/26/2011

    i wish i could say there was no truth to tis but there is and now all i do is hang my head in shame :(

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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