Im Nothing

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  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

Im Nothing

What is this fear I feel
Why cant I sleep at night.
He took away my life.
I use to have dignity and pride
Now im nothing and its
All my fault.
He called my name
I thought it was my friend
God I was so wrong
He grabed my right arm
I sherked I knew what was
Going to happen.
I trie to think of ways
To leave, but whtever I tried
He'd just drag me farther
Down that blackend hallway
He took me to the very back door,
He opend it up and pushed me inside.
What is this fear I feel
Why cant I sleep at night
He took away my life
I use to have dignity and pride
Now im othing and its
All my fault.

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combatrider commented on Im Nothing

01-18-2012

I must say I was not prepared for that, it came from one direction and then another. I liked it. By nature I look for corrections and changes of all works in progress. Not your fault.

am2anangel commented on Im Nothing

12-07-2011

This is a very sad write. I hope it's not true. Never feel you're to blame for anothers actions. A great write tragic in the telling. well done. -Tonya

wiskeygirl5090

12/26/2011

i wish i could say there was no truth to tis but there is and now all i do is hang my head in shame :(

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

wiskeygirl5090’s Poems (76)

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Your Growing Up 0
A Dozzen Roses 2
Fast Forword 0
Two Angels 0
The Little Things 0
Dim 4
So Lonely 1
Mothers and Fools 2
I Need Something To Believe In 2
This Hurt 1
Thinking Of You 2
A Hero's Welcome 1
Gone 0
Angels In Heaven 0
Missing You 1
Washing away my sins 1
Hold Me By The Strings 0
I Still Need To Know 2
Letting Go 6
Strong 1
Momma Your My Hero 0
Leaving Home 0
Insanity 1
Im Nothing 2
The Only Sound 1
All My Fault 1
Nobody 1
Confussed 0
No Ones Sees 4
Two Years Ago Today 2
Friends 0
Good-Bye 1
Tourcherd Soul 1
Lonely Tonight 1
Did I 3
Delusions 1
Thats All You Are 1
My Last Teardrop 3
Secerts 3
WHY 1
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You Saved Me 2
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And I Will Try 3
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To Many Times 0
Wounds 1
WHAT 1
Waiting For TheFall 1
Talk Your Shit 1
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Angery All The Time 2
When Its Family 0
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Puppet 3
One More Day 2
Fly Away 1
One More Tear 1
Only Love 0
Moon And Back 1
Fighting Lonely 2
Lonely 2
Forgive Me 2
Forbiden Love 0
My Demon 1
Just Who I am 1
Glistoning Eyes 1
End Of The World 3
The Game 0
Love 0