hello out there....


  • Loneliness
    • Mandi
    • I am here, heart in hand, ready to share time and poems ith anyone who will give me the time in their day.

    Poem Commentary

    Everyone has their secrets.

    hello out there....

    today I am invisible

    nobody knows I am here
    no one responds
    no one notices
    no one cares

    today I am invisible

    now, do I disappear?

    today I am invisible

    I walk alone
    I talk to myself
    myself answers

    today I am invisible

    today I am invisible

    I see people
    Living people

    but,...   today I am invisivle

    today I am inviisble

    I must keep the secrets
    Locked up inside
    No one must know
    Of the secrets I hide

    I must stay invisible
    I must stay invisible

    No one must know
    Of the old man
    I was so young

    He said :
    This will be our little secret

    I am invisible

    he can't touch me here
    but, there he is again
    but, now he is young
    a college kid

     I am only eight
    he is at the slide
    he  helps all
    the little girls down
    in his own special way

    he says:
    WE will meet again,
    We will have a playdate
    Why is he doing that?

    Is this our little secret?

    Please make me invisible..

    hello out there....

    can anyone hear me
    I feel alone in this world
    so insignificant and smalll
    my stack of feelings is tall

    no one wants to hear my litany?
    my fears..
    did I like it?
    what's wrong with me?

    hello out there!!

    why doesn't somone call?

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    REGINA2 commented on hello out there....


    I was also a victim of child abuse. I feel your pain. Please read some of mine.



    you know I never told anyone till I was past 50... makes me wonder

    SEVEN commented on hello out there....


    This is totally wicked.....it seems like I been there too....Totally Invisible", but will they notice me when I subside?.....Kudos on this write

    brokenhearted11 commented on hello out there....


    ah-freaking-mazing!!!!!!!!! love it! everybody gets this way sometimes, like you are all alone in this big old world. great write, keep it up!!! :)

    themommyof2 commented on hello out there....


    I have felt that way on many days. I think you really hit the nail on the head with this subject. It is sad how so many of us are forced to live through and with these horrible feelings. Sorry you know these feelings so well. I know them too.

    redbloodink commented on hello out there....


    WoW Mandi... invisibale this is not...... I felt this even tho I'm not a lil girl outside inside I am..... taken advantage of when I was 9 I felt then as the lil girl inside as you speak of...... Some one was there and is here now to take that pain mend them wounds and heal you..... I hope you have met Him and felt Him ..... for He is Jesus and His love heals all....... red

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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    All Alone At The Plate 0
    Moon Man 0
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    Ah,Ha! 1
    Sometimes We Should Listen to Friends 1
    Destiny 1
    undeclared love 1
    Search On 1
    There's a candle burning bright in my window tonight... 2
    The Searcher 3
    And 'The World's in Ttheir Hands? 1
    When Young Dreams Die 6
    The Garden 4
    Letting Go 1
    Confusion 3
    And, So, Life Goes (C'est la Vie) 1
    Would you still leave me? 2
    Till I Knew You 4
    A Good Day 6
    A Little White Lie 3
    ~ ~ Cindy's Garden ~~ 2
    The Wheezy, Sneezy Wabbits 2
    Into the Azure Blue Sky (original) 1
    Ode to a Grecian.... ahh, I mean, to Diet Orange Crush 3
    Life Goes On 3
    love pending... 1
    And then I said.... 1
    On The Outside Looking In 3
    In One Fell Swoop... 6
    A Part of the Crowd 3
    That's the Story of My Life 4
    I Think I'm Gonna' Write a Book 8
    I Am She 7
    Acceptance 11
    And So.... Let This Be Said! 9
    This Is My Kingfdom 7
    Darling 7
    Rose by the Sea` 7
    Into the Azure Blue Sky 22
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    On July 24th, 2010 4
    Forsaken? 8
    Silence of the Lambs 5
    Rise Up From Slumber 10
    Conversion 3
    Shades of Kevin 8
    hello out there.... 12
    Now If That Ain't Love, I Don't Know What Is! 7
    The Man Who Kept the Law 9
    Tell Me Little Baby what do you see? 9
    My Last Everything 17
    In The Pink 14
    Making the Cut 8
    Letter To An Unnamed Lover 7
    Where the Trolls Live 11
    Three Little Girls and the Witch's Tower 9
    Sunrise of Life 4
    Is Anyone Like Me? 11
    Waiting 8
    Beautiful Bella 4
    A Place in the World 4
    Friend 4
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    Devotion 2
    Reflections 6
    Just One of Those Days 3
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    Destiny 1
    Dreamland 1
    Grandaughters 4
    The Prairie Highway 4
    Play Ball? 4
    When Day is Done 4
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    Longing 4
    On Angel's Wings 3
    Frustration 2
    I Am Too Smart 1
    Too Late 3
    bon jour 1
    Limerick for a Cop 2
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    Heaven's Tide 2
    I Remember You, Dad 6
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    Missing Little Things 1
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