In The Pink

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    • Mandi
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    written for a 5 year old

    In The Pink

    In the wee hours of the morning
    When most good children are still asleep
    There comes a lumbering dragon
    And, he doesn't make a peep

    But, if you should catch him lurking
    He will give a mighty roar
    Then, his eyes will turn bright yellow
    And, through the air he'll soar

    So, the buzzing you hear isn't a mosquito
    Even though that's what you think
    But, a terribly , ferocious dragon
    Who is very brave, and very pink...

    He knows he has a duty,
    To continue the destiny
    Of all pink dragons that came before him
    Thus building a dynasty


    So, if you think hear a buzzing
    Don't swat, for heaven's sake
    Because you might just destroy a kingdom
    All in the hours before you wake.

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    MootPoint commented on In The Pink

    08-15-2013

    This shows great imagination and is very nice. "So, if you think hear a buzzing" should be "So, if you think you hear a buzzing". But really, I like it. ")

    Mandi

    09/07/2013

    that's me careless.

    poetlyrics33 commented on In The Pink

    07-24-2011

    Great poem! I love how nicely it flows with the words and thought.

    phatdaddee commented on In The Pink

    10-28-2010

    Awesome poem Mandi! I love this as a children's narrative! You are blessed with a gift of innocence.

    Mandi

    11/02/2010

    thank you I welcome your input, but, mostly, I want you tobe entertained

    REGINA2 commented on In The Pink

    10-24-2010

    Another great poem. You should write children's books. You have wonderful talent.

    Mandi

    10/24/2010

    thanks...I liked it mtyself.

    winterkou commented on In The Pink

    08-31-2010

    This is a cool write, pink dragons. who knows maybe God made pink dragons back in the day, maybe they lived with the dinosaurs.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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