Contemplation

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    Contemplation

    Judge me not,
    nor intercede-
    this path is chosen
    and fate to lead.
    I can't remember
    why I'm here
    nor comprehend,
    twas by my own freewill.
    And who's to say
    this will end
    without comfort
    my fair weather friend.
    You cannot see
    nor understand,
    I must see this
    comedic farce
    till its end.
    Opening eyes
    to misfit fugue
    and ignore
    questionable chance:
    come with me
    and try this dance-
    after all
    life is but a game,
    the path's the same,
    always the same.
    Hence who's to blame,
    an alibi;
    forgive this misfits
    foolishness;
    faith in blind remembrance;
    fate, my friend,
    I lay out my hand....
    full house-
    I win.

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    christy73 commented on Contemplation

    02-12-2010

    I REALLY LIKED THIS POEM...IT IS REALLY CUTE ....I LOVE THE BEGING AND THE END OF IT I KEPT INTERESTED AND I LIKE THAT

    cliftondurant commented on Contemplation

    01-19-2010

    yes life is amazing as you say the choice is mine and we are in control I love this poem thanks for sharing

    kage commented on Contemplation

    01-19-2010

    well thought out.Well put together mysterious as it should be surely you will be a great writer in time ..

    danmartyjake1 commented on Contemplation

    01-19-2010

    Great Write! I like the flow and choice of words was magnificent, too.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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