In This Dream I Wonder

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    In This Dream I Wonder

    Is it wrong for one
    to admit they are afraid?
    -have doubts
    from which to draw
    the strength to face;
    all tomorrows to come?
    Weak to acknowledge
    misgivings in the decisions;
    future paths wind so far
    into distant possibilities.
    Am I alone with my doubts?
    Am I alone with my fears?
    Pray I, it not be so-
    this world has lost
    all conceivable understanding
    to the singularly induced rhythm
    of a beating heart;
    unsure of where
    to place a step
    into what could be-
    eternity?
    Care not the consequences,
    damn the mind;
    is this all there is
    from the passage of time?
    Little wonder,
    imagination's flow;
    lost, afraid-alone?
    Can it not be
    the future holds
    much more than this;
    my nightmarish folds
    into my heart,
    my mind and soul;
    as the tears flow,
    flow into the sea.
    Dream this,
    my spirit seeks to free
    me from the blindness;
    persecute not
    those who decree;
    this life's worth
    in one can seek:
    open the gates
    into peaceful bliss;
    heaven calls,
    angels sing;
    rest and doubt no more!
    Welcome life
    and accept death
    as but one more ladder to climb:
    one more path to unfold.


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    stever commented on In This Dream I Wonder

    11-13-2009

    reallly good stuff here..very small print kinda hard to read,, but i did,,and loved it

    kittylilly commented on In This Dream I Wonder

    11-12-2009

    i see u write fom the heart , i think that is a wounderful and beatiful poem and i am thankfull about poeple when they share thier heart in their peoms

    DeepEclipse commented on In This Dream I Wonder

    11-07-2009

    This reminds me of a quote from Bruce Lee [They always want to know how to win, they never try to accept how to lose]. Sometimes I wonder if I fear bordeom more than death. One who admits their fears has no flank. I like how this dives deep into itself and pulls out a raw sense of honesty. Felt good to read it. like a question i'd ask myself...

    lois2lane245 commented on In This Dream I Wonder

    10-23-2009

    this is amazing poem and one of the best i have herd of in a while great work i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Mareann commented on In This Dream I Wonder

    10-22-2009

    This is a well rounded poem, passion, excitement, angelic. Good job writing, thanks for posting.Mareann please come share your poetry at , http://mareannspoetry.ning.com

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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