Sail Away My Dreams

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  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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stepping out of the norm with one extra line per stanza for a sonnet............lol

Sail Away My Dreams

I see the shores upon the sky like Caribbean blue
Before they did fall, this dream was all so new & free
My heart follows natures path of green, seeking loves path so true
Your heart and my soul, I see everywhere natures path takes me
Dragonflies pause in my path, bringing messages of love from you

Come take me far beyond the yellow sea
Let the waves wash over me and sail away in my amenity
Far, far beneath the coral sea, I will be with thee
Sail away, sail away, sail away with me, to drift on serenity
Carry me to the islands of your dreams, to the shores of Tripoli

Dreams of you follow me, through all my days and nights
One day, one night, my dreams could take me to you
This I tell you, my love, is my book of days without you in my life
Nothing here or far away will keep me from finding you
Come float away with me, like the butterfly fluttering so high


Many days are yet unwritten for me, even if I falter without you here today
Your fate became my journey, far and away, my heart finds the way

Written by
Asha
2010©


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GUSTY commented on Sail Away My Dreams

08-24-2010

I LOVE THIS WORK FOR ITS FREE-FLOW; NOR HAS IT JUST FOR ONCE HIDDEN ITS MAGIC AND MAGNETISM THAT KEEPS ONE GOING TILL THE VERY LAST LETTER GOES PRONOUNCED!!! MAGNIFICENT!!!

ApaqRasgirl

08/24/2010

thank you dear for the wonderful words you grace me with......I am truly honored that you enjoy my work so much.........loves ya asha

ginga commented on Sail Away My Dreams

08-21-2010

Asha, The images that come to the reader's mind in this poem are wondrous and vivid. ty ginga

ApaqRasgirl

08/21/2010

thank you dear for the sweet comment.....I am glad it touched the reader in a wonderful way........thanks....love asha

truth917 commented on Sail Away My Dreams

08-21-2010

Wow! Pictures painted so beautifully. I know that feeling all to well, and the way you described it was unspeakable. Thanks you for the wonderful read

ApaqRasgirl

08/21/2010

thank you dear for that sweet comment, I am thrilled you enjoyed it....thanks love asha

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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