The Thistle(revised)

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    The Thistle(revised)


    The Thistle

    Our thistle of love, forever true
    Many petals to count, for reasons to love you
    If they prick my fingers and make them bleed
    Each drop scrafised makes our love more complete


    Each new blossom that blooms with spring
    Count even the ones yet unseen
    Shows us grace in the many ways our love is renewed
    These thistles of love I give to you, shall never be blue


    The first thistle of love I gave you to start
    Forever pressed in the pocket of my heart
    Each day I count those petals of love times ten
    For all the reasons I have loved you now and back then


    Deep purple hue, our thistles color exposed to you
    Shows the warmth in our hearts forever true
    Share with me all those thistles I've picked those days
    For they show how are love forever embraced


    Forever our thistles shall bloom for the love I feel for you
    Each prick of their thorns shows many ways I've tickled you
    Embrace the faith that our love will always bloom each spring
    As you watch from your heaven above, I shall pick our thistles and sing

    My love for you shall always be true


    Written by
    Asha
    2010
    ©
    An old poem 'The Thistle' revised in this write


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    ayyan commented on The Thistle(revised)

    08-02-2010

    Your poem is with deep sense of LOVE.I am vry much attracted by the bottom line" My love for you shall always be true". Very high points. - ayyan-

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/02/2010

    thank you dear, I am glad you liked it.......blessings to you love asha

    ayyan

    08/02/2010

    Thanks. asha is your name, it is a good name denoting confident. with regards - ayyan -

    ApaqRasgirl

    08/02/2010

    yes dear my name is actually Asha`di, but I just shorten it to asha...thrilled you like my name....... loves ya asha

    RHPeat commented on The Thistle(revised)

    07-22-2010

    A Thistle of love is new to me. This is very real in its presentation of metaphor. Thanx for sharing.

    ApaqRasgirl

    07/22/2010

    Thank you for you great comment, this piece I revised from the original poem 'The Thistle' that I wrote a few years back for an old love I had, the original is also posted here probably down towards the bottom of my poems list if you should like to read it. it was one of my better poems back then. thanks for the nice comment. love asha

    ginga commented on The Thistle(revised)

    07-22-2010

    Asha, Appreciated for its edit and lovely message. tyvm ginga

    ApaqRasgirl

    07/22/2010

    thank you dear, The Thistle was an old one I wrote more then ten years ago, for my first hubby, and at this moment it is still one of my favorites so I revised it with the words I feel for my new love in this life. blessings dear love asha

    alb29oclfl commented on The Thistle(revised)

    07-22-2010

    nice rhythm and flow, a great write and nice read

    ApaqRasgirl

    07/22/2010

    thank you dear, I am thrilled you liked it. love asha

    SavVySam commented on The Thistle(revised)

    07-22-2010

    This is really lovely romantic writing! Very well composed and presented by you! Fine, fine work!

    ApaqRasgirl

    07/22/2010

    thank you dear for such sweet comment, I am glad you liked it. love asha

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