Stormy Purification

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    Stormy Purification

    Stormy Purification

     

    Tempest winds bluster all about, with a melancholy melody crying.

     

    Calming breezes have metamorphosed into a maelstrom of energy torn between a constructive replenishment and the destruction of the unwilling.

     

    The outward turbulence is pulling the safeguarded and strong towards its storm through a cacophony of mesmerizing symphonic collisions.

     

    Shards of liquid clash with solid form, streaming in hardened raging rivers to penetrate the opaque.

     

    From behind a protective transparency, the pulsation driven against the window pane transfixes personal pain into threads of tolerance.

     

    Malicious static hypnotically darkens the surroundings in a prosaic imperceptible mood.

     

    Though the fire of daylight is masked by a nocturnal sky, an internal compilation of sentiment is fueled from the envelopment of the etherized thunder.

     

    The lightning pierces like unforgiving blows, seemly without any purpose but to proclaim with strident streaks that there is an omniscient power looming.

     

    How minuscule and fragile life becomes when the sanctity of foundations are uprooted and appearances are distorted without the ability to do battle against the recursion.

     

    The perpetual and undying is owned by nothing earthly; the acknowledgment that the cataclysmic whirlwinds are self depleting brings bittersweet salvation.

     

    Howling masses of rancorous gusts cannibalize themselves until the invasion subsides into shrinking blurs.

     

    The revelation of the transitory squall has materialized its presence to tearfully extract the weak while separately renewing a saturated creation.

     

    The freshness of the air caresses the senses of the flesh and the cleansing nature of life itself, as all of soul and spirit is reincarnated by a baptism of forgiveness.

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    SavVySam commented on Stormy Purification

    12-03-2009

    I absolutely love this moving and elemental piece! Fine work! Added to my favorites list! ~10

    soulwriter

    12/03/2009

    Big Thanks! I like this piece for even when I read it I remember the write and feel the electricity that was all around.

    Katylove commented on Stormy Purification

    08-14-2009

    I love a passionate storm.... so cleansing.. gives air to fresh beginnings.. Thank you for sharing~

    soulwriter

    08/24/2009

    Always a pleasure to share, thank you for reading.

    ginga commented on Stormy Purification

    08-13-2009

    WOW! This poem is a tempest unto itself, blowing and reeling with well-chosen words and images. I love your wordsmithing in this one. The emotion it evokes is impressive and the entire poem is provocative. ginga

    soulwriter

    08/14/2009

    So glad that you found such a liking of this peace that served me peaceful purification during its creation. Thank you.

    Lolee commented on Stormy Purification

    07-23-2009

    This one shows off your lovely vocabulary... but it's out of my league I guess, because I just can't relate. But I know our higher thinkers are eating it up with a spoon. Good job...Einstein!

    soulwriter

    07/23/2009

    That would be little Einstein, E = effort, with the love of writing squared! I appreciate your valued time and comments!

    Tempestlady commented on Stormy Purification

    07-15-2009

    You got me! I am impressed by your vocabulary, mesmerized by the randrops, relating the whole storm to my life, and finish with a clean and renewed feeling of optimism. A truy great rite, for some maybe a difficult read, but i lovd it. Great write, write on......

    soulwriter

    07/15/2009

    The piece has received so many different responses - it turned out to be one of my own personal favorites -- thank you for sharing it along with me.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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