Black Swans Awn Pink Lawns

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    I need an artist to paint this for my book??

    Black Swans Awn Pink Lawns

    The great land afar

    is grand and bizarre

    Black swans wander and go

    on pink lawns to and fro

    Under a yellow sky

    Orange clouds weep green rain

    Storms slowly raise in this domain

    With a bright blue sun

    It is big to behold

    the striking red lightning phenomenon

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    Madelynn commented on Black Swans Awn Pink Lawns

    01-10-2010

    You are my garden of whimsy, sweetheart! When you first got to know me, you shared your ginormous arsenal of poetry-and then, invited me to read anything I wanted-'it's all yours to enjoy', you said!-For some reason, this uniquely innocent write was the first I chose. I remember thinkin' of how beautiful your spirit is, how deeply talented you run. Now, after reading hundreds of pieces you have written...know what?..I still feel the same way, only now, with love! TJO-luvinz
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    WordSlinger

    01/10/2010

    :) come here let me luvnz back, Whismy Garden , :) thank you :X my TKO, lol, ty WS, I loved writind this lil, poem, Grito requested, it's really a childrens poem, lol, remember crayons, lol

    epiksonik commented on Black Swans Awn Pink Lawns

    12-29-2009

    Ahh breathtaking. The colors choices are utterly vivid against the natural pop happenstance. You're great.
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    WordSlinger

    12/29/2009

    Martin, thank you.. I have allot of work to do before I'm great, , lol, ty WS

    Hampton commented on Black Swans Awn Pink Lawns

    12-29-2009

    A great title for a classic poem from a poetry super star. 10.
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    WordSlinger

    12/29/2009

    ty Hampton, you shine Ws

    dancinghawk commented on Black Swans Awn Pink Lawns

    12-28-2009

    all the colors of the rainbow, like a picture of another soul dream ... love these visuals ... -dh
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    WordSlinger

    12/28/2009

    DH~ again thank you, I'm happy you liked, :) WS

    danmartyjake1 commented on Black Swans Awn Pink Lawns

    12-27-2009

    I so love the imaginative use of colour in this funky collection. This far out world is a groovy extension of your mind. Thanks for the reveal..........10 for groovy!
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    WordSlinger

    12/28/2009

    DMJ, groovy huh, lol WS

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    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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