Watermelon

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    It is love to be there for the one you love when they are sick. Another WordSketch By John E WordSlinger

    Watermelon


    Under my loves canopy

    In the angels garden of dreams

    You sleep upon the flight of a fever

    And I from our purest foundations

    Reach into intimacies fountain

    And moisten the thirst of your spirit


    There is not a lash from grand time

    That I’m not there by your bedside

    This is my gallant adventure delight:

    The art of fluffing and tucking

    Shall I depart to forage the countryside

    You will know I grant return to soothe


    There is a sound to carefulness

    It strums a peaceful chord

    And you shall sing once again

    the rhythm of concord



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    poetry2069 commented on Watermelon

    03-09-2010

    I like your poem it was very touching and well written, thanks for posting it!
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    WordSlinger

    03/09/2010

    thank you ty, ¸.·*¨¸.·*WWWorrrrrrdddsssslllllllliiiinnnngggggggerrrr \,,/(-.-)\,,/

    kabbalistic commented on Watermelon

    01-15-2010

    Wow!!! What marvelous texture and compelling imagery!!! This is so well crafted that I'm absolutely blown away!!! This is quintessential Worrrrrdddddsssssssllllllllliiiiinnnnnnnggggggerrrrrrrr!!!! LOL
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    WordSlinger

    01/15/2010

    lol, I like these comments, your funny as ducks that drive boats, loll ty WS

    stellar commented on Watermelon

    01-15-2010

    A poem so lovely and touching...And I from our purest foundations Reach into intimacies fountain And moisten the thirst of your spirit....love this line..:)
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    WordSlinger

    01/15/2010

    Stellar well, thank you, very very much, lol, ty WS

    bloomingsun commented on Watermelon

    01-11-2010

    Wow, this is poetic perfection, I especially loved that last verse. What a loving poem ~one beloved to the other's soul. Great!! Again, wow...
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    WordSlinger

    01/12/2010

    Why thank you again there, Bloomingsun, :) The wheels on my wagon go round and round, for the one I love, but the never spin, one time we got them to burn some wood, Ivy, is one good horse, :) ty WS

    kah commented on Watermelon

    01-08-2010

    this is so touching! The feel your words created is spiritual and filled with devotion - I love it!
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    WordSlinger

    01/10/2010

    Kah ty so much, I have a wagon full of em, take what you need, ty WS

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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