Siamese Nightja-wu

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This is a collaboration with the poet Malik Peterson.

http://www.originalpoetry.com/poet/MalikPeterson

We talked about deja-vu, and experienced it.

Siamese Nightja-wu

This is a

 Siamese

   Nightja-wu

     I’m in-

my paranormal

   pajamas

they call skin

 

Have I,

 lived this all before,

 Do

 You

  Hear

    Me,-you-?

It’s ok,

 I’m just

  Changing

    my memory-

 

No-need to

 watch the news,

 its way to happy-

Thoughts are,

 slippery, few

 No-need for theory

 

The life and lamb

A book program

I got it, a hologram

A telepathic telegram

 

It’s like a cell phone

 all wired up to the wall at home

It’s like a ghost

 the man of the house, the host

All this has happened before

 After I come through the door

 

Did you see anyone

 recreate the entire seen?

Are you aware of the facts?

 this maybe a dream?

Are you receiving this

 twice maybe, between?

Do you really sense, the day‘s

 somewhere I mean?

 

An amplifier

 rhyme amp

A stamp-able

 time stamp

It’s so funny

 Look Honey!

 

No one knows how all of this works

It’s all falling apart from all the jerks

The world’s closet is getting close to full

Everything’s been pushed back like wool

 

Sheep-happens in this Nightja-wu

 

Its happenings are fantastically immaculate.

The catalyst sits atop my wrist...tocks and ticks…

stoppages of a rocky mist...timeless...my mental megalopolis.

An octopus in sheep skin...I'm taking stock in this...

as electrons charge around my nucleus like a rhinoceros.

 

It's obvious...I'm cosmetic in the cosmos' population

my visage an eclectic collage...a constellation...

so I'm in the sky with diamonds...your observation?     

I'm free from all earthly worries...an inoculation.

 

A conversation...

 

that I can feel coming in the air of this nightja-wu...

because I've been snared in its lair this night plus two...

yet it's rare I can compare this night's sight with you...

we two moon gaze...

 

I see a scene...the same...you too

 

Still gaze we shall...what must we do?

We trust its weight's not new...

but trust in who?

In my mind's rewind I recollect a custom hue 

A hint of clairvoyance...a tint a hair buoyant...

or just deep blue?

 

navy...

 

maybe...

 

actions etched in stone or testing crazy?

I'm positive I've been tested lately...

because my left brain abates me...

the rest of it hates me.

 

Plus I can't figure out why I know these trees...

and I may be bending on broken knees...

as I'm up late nights...hoping for notice while my...

focus bleeds...

and can't tell the difference between locusts...leaves

 

So I resort to floating through the galaxy... 


the only way I can make my ire leave...

and get that much desired sleep...

this nightja-vu miffs...misleads

or maybe I'm sleep walking through...rifts...misdeeds.

 

I'll make sense of it someday...with this beg...this plead...

but tonight...

 

We are Siamese...

 

if...you please. 

 

 

 

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epiksonik commented on Siamese Nightja-wu

01-30-2010

A purpose of its understaning....meaning and design ....the words chosen.........You guys, but you John....so special and unique to want to share this definition of a most common happenstance, the deja vu .... absolutely genius for giving us the opportunity to relate through a most beautiful transparency.

WordSlinger

01/30/2010

Martin, it was sometthing we talked about, then I kept experiencing it, and I haven't in a while, so I'm ok, I need to capture all this, I tried to convey the emotion, and trap it, I did like once, out of 5 times. It was fun to do., and yes I have heard of Edgar Cayce, interesting fellow, than k you Martin, WS

epiksonik commented on Siamese Nightja-wu

01-30-2010

OMG....like a valley girl I start my comment lol This was wonderful. You sent me a message about this and the subject title "Deja Vu" could have been a mash of chaotic fantasy but this poem is much more, I feel .. I sense a clarity of knowledge of it, a purpose its understanding.... a message to us all, the masses, of its meaning design. I love the words chose. The language is metaphorical yet easily discernable.... I wonder on this topic myself at times....Ever heard of Edgar Cayce?

dangedmanjr commented on Siamese Nightja-wu

12-10-2009

i think you really captured the essence of looking, smelling, conversing and living through a cat's day! absolutely fantastik!

WordSlinger

12/12/2009

What's up my friend what's up, glad ya came back, ty WS

WordSlinger

12/12/2009

Malik caught the cat, I just read it's mind, lol

bloomingsun commented on Siamese Nightja-wu

12-08-2009

Fun! This one is all over the place and virtually flies through time and space, lol... I enjoyed it so much, thanks for posting it. Your (both poets) creative energy must be a perfect mix.

WordSlinger

12/08/2009

lol, thank you, it is a fun piece, Malik is very gifted, I'm happy we did this, I feel it is strong enough, for a pillar for more adventures, of us both to create timeless Nightja-wu's ty much WS & Malik

Hampton commented on Siamese Nightja-wu

12-08-2009

Nicely done. A collaborative creation that sends the mind spinning and reeling until it reaches free fall and then gently returns to reality.

WordSlinger

12/08/2009

Hampton, Good Morning, thanks for stoppin by, I'm glad we could have landed you back to safety, ty WS

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