If Valentines Wore Clothes

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Madelynn, Happy Valentines Day, :X Another WordSketch By John E WordSlinger

If Valentines Wore Clothes

 

Two roses breathe on the bitten pillow next to you

I have many precious things, today, with love to do


A pair of dark jeans drape over a chair,

in case of the need for me, not, to do things bare

I say, this is our day, and this is how it starts

There’s no room for anything else in this heart


You sleep still, in shade

Wrapped in the morning, marinated in love

Soon my promise with the evening shall come


This day is orchestrated

from the plate of nourishment for the day

to the last heart squeeze of tonight’s’ love embrace

~

Moonlit clovers surround your souls soft case

Your cheeks allure, for sure, kisses on your face

As I place my hands they grow bright in the dark

Tell me what you love, I'll tell you who you are

All six of your senses become intense

As your pleasured eyes gaze the stars

Your stomach n’ below is bathed by my kisses

My nose swallows your bodies perfume

My breath is a warm evening mist

As I drink your dreams, forever to consume

You, and all your ways is all I crave


I love, and cherish all things I’ve taken

But giving is better, if I’m not mistaken

Oh, love, thanks to heaven, for naked truth

If Valentines Wore Clothes

My skin would be velvety smooth
Your skin would be my sweet tooth



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MarionYost commented on If Valentines Wore Clothes

02-24-2010

Very original. Loved it great flow, just a really nice poem. All the best -Marion-

WordSlinger

02/24/2010

Marion, thank you, WS

deanne commented on If Valentines Wore Clothes

02-18-2010

I really like this poem, and all the others poetry you have wtitten. You are truly a gifted poet. Keep it up. I would consider it an honor for you to critique my work.

WordSlinger

02/18/2010

Deanne, thank you WS

poett commented on If Valentines Wore Clothes

02-17-2010

sensual and romantic description of how a man should unveil his rose petal by petal softly with gentleness pleasing her is good enough to make him happy. Lovely write.... Maria

WordSlinger

02/17/2010

Poett, thank you, WS

kmooney commented on If Valentines Wore Clothes

02-15-2010

I liked this alot WS. Great write. I can see why this attracted so much attention. This is not a style I do well with. You seem to have mastered it. Thanks for sharing... Kevin

WordSlinger

02/15/2010

Thank you Kevin, WS

MalikPeterson commented on If Valentines Wore Clothes

02-14-2010

Your images tell this tale...good job!

WordSlinger

02/14/2010

Thank you Malik, :) WS

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