Spirits' Pillow

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This is a poem for my friend here on OP. I' am with you my friend. :) Another WordSketch By John E WordSlinger

Spirits' Pillow

Good Morning Beautiful Sexy Evening

I seen a slide show, mind the future, oh

It captured your smile so beautiful

I felt your kiss again, it’s nature so

present upon my lips


I heard your laughter spreading apart

on my reaching sound arms

I stand with memories leading far

Into the rare soul your body kept


Tonight

The words

I love you

was on the invisible mirror

Written by your soul

I awoke with a smile

And kissed the spirit air

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Tinytree commented on Spirits' Pillow

02-21-2010

Beautiful. You manage to say so much with so much feeling in not so many words. It touched my heart.

WordSlinger

02/21/2010

Thank you, this Poem is for a friend that never commented, :(, WS

SexzAngel commented on Spirits' Pillow

01-21-2010

Very Beautiful and heart felt. A song to the heart and a whisper to the spirit. Such love unrestrained. Love it.

WordSlinger

01/21/2010

Ty Angel, I'm glad that you liked the poem, :) WS

IzzyGumbo commented on Spirits' Pillow

01-21-2010

magical. :) ..........................................................

WordSlinger

01/21/2010

Thank you, this is for my friend, that never commented on it yet lol, ty Ws

Grito commented on Spirits' Pillow

01-07-2010

A poem that is sentiently transdimentional and, to me, empowering by presenting higher Spirit air.

WordSlinger

01/07/2010

ty Grito, Im glad you stopped by ty WS :)

dahlusion commented on Spirits' Pillow

01-06-2010

Sweet and to the point, filled with satisfaction, like an angel folding its wings for the evening to sleep in.

WordSlinger

01/06/2010

ty Dah, Angels dream of Poets, :) WS

dahlusion

01/07/2010

Angels are poets, painters, sculptors, gardeners, teachers, and radicals; my favorite is Lucifer, he has a mind of his own and likes to stir things up. You are welcome.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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