Diamond Boy

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True love and character exhibits integrity through consistant moral excellence. Another WordSketch, by John E WordSlinger

Diamond Boy


As a cool current, I smiled through the sky

You are a cute boy, the hot girls said of I


They all wanted to flow with me on the air

Whirling around, flirting to become a pair


The elder clouds gave me advice for aim

‘Choice of a thunderstorm or hurricane’


I could be massive, and do it alone

Point be noticed, and be heard with a tone


I seen the spark, and started my lightning

We shall call you Diamond Boy, delighting'
~

I found the secret, and became its trait

Moral excellence is my priceless fate


I felt life was full of constant pressure

My strength was joy in hope, my fond treasure


My words, spread as ice, valuable and rare

As they fell with dreams, dropped deeply with care


They melted to tear like, water poems,

soft formed, pools of devotional totems
~

I was only a warm wonder shower,

and held back my tornado of power


I fell in love with her, the fruitful earth

She was happy I’ve given farmers worth


She said, I was song, real, her sexy storm,

‘We are blessed, Diamond Boy that you were born’


I was heard, seen, and dreamt in the vast skies

When the birds choral, they sing my goodbyes


A storm has heavy burdens to sustain

They go through life separating the grain


My character produces hope, my rain

I had a choice, so Diamond Boy's my name
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cousinsoren commented on Diamond Boy

01-27-2010

I am surprised that DIAMOND BOY has not been declared a Contest Winner It is rhythnically and intrinsically sublime. I have to return to it soon again to ingest its truths and beauty, and write an apprecaitive comment.

WordSlinger

01/27/2010

Cuz, thank you so much, I really love, and enjoy your comments. They mean alot to me, thank you, WS

Springsize commented on Diamond Boy

01-27-2010

you're a prolific writer, gifted with the energy to find and display... but it's the shine on your face like the honor badge you wear -- that impresses me most... and Ms Manners would be so pleased....

WordSlinger

01/27/2010

wow, your comment is so cool, it makes me happy for sure, ty much, WS

Hampton commented on Diamond Boy

01-25-2010

A very poignant write John. Full of verbal earthtones and spiritual suggestion. 10.

WordSlinger

01/25/2010

Hampton, Jimmy O Fallon is a Diamond Boy, lol, ty WS

Rhymer commented on Diamond Boy

01-23-2010

Imaginative, your creativity is amzing. The imagery and flow are excellent. 10 from me.

WordSlinger

01/23/2010

Thank you Rhymer, :) ty ty WS

knight4696 commented on Diamond Boy

01-18-2010

Sling - Where do you come up with this stuff?!! This is amazing, I love the storyline and need I say the rhyme and flow are of course perfect as well. Definately another Masterpiece from the Master Wordslinger! :) Ken

WordSlinger

01/18/2010

Ken, thanks bro, Master, no,not me, master of disaster maybe , lol, but I do like this one alot, ty very very much, :) WS

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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