The Mere Promise/Horse of Love

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    This is how I WordSlinger rides the Horse of Love

    (Poem sound effects play this while you read, while I ride)

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    The Mere Promise/Horse of Love

    The call of the Great Spirit kissed my ears

    Calling me home, for my tending’s there

    With my head held high

    homeward on, I feared


    My only thought, was of her loneliness

    Calling me back, to clear her emptiness

    With my head held in awe

    I became the word-mere


    In a splash of light I was there

    In the judgment chair

    With the sound of waves, he declared

    I ‘am fulfilling my promise,

    granting you, to be a Heavens pioneer

    Build somewhere,

    build somewhere on Heavens frontier

    Ride the horse of love, on the plains of trust

    Until her reuniting day she will share with us




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    Marsink commented on The Mere Promise/Horse of Love

    12-05-2009

    The words are clear and true, bringing love to view. How many lives will we touch before we cross the Channel? Thanks for sharing this grand adventrue.

    WordSlinger

    12/05/2009

    Mars that you ink you have I think it's toxic, who can I have a few ccs, lol ty Man Happy Holidays, ty WS

    ViolinestAP commented on The Mere Promise/Horse of Love

    12-05-2009

    This is grand, indeed...cleverly written, a 20! if there were such rating... :D

    WordSlinger

    12/05/2009

    My Cello, lol thanks for reading, Happy Holdays WS

    HarverTomsson commented on The Mere Promise/Horse of Love

    12-05-2009

    A wordsmith allows no random adjuncts. This one weaves a rare tapestry that few will totally appreciate. Hey WSlinger, will you be satisfied with merely a 10?

    WordSlinger

    12/05/2009

    Harver, thank you so much, I'm glad you stopped by, it's been awhile, , Happy Holidays, WS

    gogant commented on The Mere Promise/Horse of Love

    12-05-2009

    Hey Word....you get a 10 from me on this one. I do like it very much...you give me the feeling that you might be part Native American........Give me a horse of love, and let me ride..............g

    WordSlinger

    12/05/2009

    lol, I get a change, wow, wel thank you my dear friend, yes I' am Wapello/Irish, sure I'll just ask the Great Spirit, ok, ty WS

    dragonfly1023 commented on The Mere Promise/Horse of Love

    12-04-2009

    I think Instead of the four horsemen of the apocalypse we need word-mere and three other riders sent out into the world to spread lasting peace and love. Two thumbs up Slinger.

    WordSlinger

    12/04/2009

    My Friend Dragonfly, thanks so much for stopping by, Missed ya much was I, thank you, I relpy, WS

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