It's All So Beautiful When Untouched :: WordSlinger :: Original Poetry

It's All So Beautiful When Untouched

Here comes that fiery feeling

The one, I see so gleaming

So I sing with rejoicing,

But somehow I’m losing my voice

A shared strength complete

Comfortable when so weak

All of it was given to me,

But now I’m unable to speak

The thoughts of a conquered hunger

To be satisfied, and strongly whole

Although so soon I do realize

Of all it’s true wonder was a show

Why the magician must be

On the constant glow

But now I see, leaving it to be

just a blue powdered rose

It’s all fine and such

when it‘s untouched

It has it’s magic

Of giving, an experience of blush

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jesusfreake commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched 03-09-2010: entrancing, flowing, graceful....ur poems are always these three....although this poem may be short, the few words that you put in here make it something pure and unique and I just love reading ur poems; Reply to Comment

WordSlinger 03/09/2010: Blue, thank you, , ¸.·*¨¸.·*WWWorrrrrrdddsssslllllllliiiinnnngggggggerrrr

danmartyjake1 commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched 01-02-2010: This poem feels and reads as beautiful as the sentiment it captures and releases for the writer and the reader. Beautiful!; Reply to Comment

WordSlinger 01/02/2010: DMJ, that is true, this poem is always inspiring me. lol, ty WS

Duke2ann commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched 11-25-2009: So well written, I love the way the words flow and the beauty of this poem!; Reply to Comment

WordSlinger 11/26/2009: ty Duke, I love it, I went and read yours, good stuff ty Ws

SavVySam commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched 11-17-2009: Ok..Now you've got me scurrying off to find my "Reach the Beach" cd..lol ... Loved this dreamy poem of tender giving and later realization. "A shared strength complete Comfortable when so weak" ( wonderful and telling sentiment); Reply to Comment

WordSlinger 11/17/2009: Sammy, thanks, yes I love that cd, it was one of my first cds, when I was innocent, the song is about innocence with talent, glad you enjoyed it, ty WS

kah commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched 11-09-2009: This is lovely and soft...so gentle...the very first line caught me!; Reply to Comment

WordSlinger 11/09/2009: ty, lol that first line gets people in trouble everytime.ty WS

WordSlinger 11/09/2009: oh that's why it's so beautiful when untouched, glad you enjoyed...

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