It's All So Beautiful When Untouched

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    (I guess this is why people are afraid of truly loving;

    Maybe this is how they see it)

    ( I choose to Love to the full degree,

    And maybe I’m the magician,)

    (And maybe one day Saved By Zero, The fixx=\
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JOiZP8FS5Ww)

    lmao

    It's All So Beautiful When Untouched

    Here comes that fiery feeling

    The one, I see so gleaming

    So I sing with rejoicing,

    But somehow I’m losing my voice


    A shared strength complete

    Comfortable when so weak

    All of it was given to me,

    But now I’m unable to speak


    The thoughts of a conquered hunger

    To be satisfied, and strongly whole

    Although so soon I do realize

    Of all it’s true wonder was a show


    Why the magician must be

    On the constant glow

    But now I see, leaving it to be

    just a blue powdered rose


    It’s all fine and such

    when it‘s untouched

    It has it’s magic

    Of giving, an experience of blush





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    jesusfreake commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched

    03-09-2010

    entrancing, flowing, graceful....ur poems are always these three....although this poem may be short, the few words that you put in here make it something pure and unique and I just love reading ur poems

    WordSlinger

    03/09/2010

    Blue, thank you, , ¸.·*¨¸.·*WWWorrrrrrdddsssslllllllliiiinnnngggggggerrrr

    danmartyjake1 commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched

    01-02-2010

    This poem feels and reads as beautiful as the sentiment it captures and releases for the writer and the reader. Beautiful!

    WordSlinger

    01/02/2010

    DMJ, that is true, this poem is always inspiring me. lol, ty WS

    Duke2ann commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched

    11-25-2009

    So well written, I love the way the words flow and the beauty of this poem!

    WordSlinger

    11/26/2009

    ty Duke, I love it, I went and read yours, good stuff ty Ws

    SavVySam commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched

    11-17-2009

    Ok..Now you've got me scurrying off to find my "Reach the Beach" cd..lol ... Loved this dreamy poem of tender giving and later realization. "A shared strength complete Comfortable when so weak" ( wonderful and telling sentiment)

    WordSlinger

    11/17/2009

    Sammy, thanks, yes I love that cd, it was one of my first cds, when I was innocent, the song is about innocence with talent, glad you enjoyed it, ty WS

    kah commented on It's All So Beautiful When Untouched

    11-09-2009

    This is lovely and soft...so gentle...the very first line caught me!

    WordSlinger

    11/09/2009

    ty, lol that first line gets people in trouble everytime.ty WS

    WordSlinger

    11/09/2009

    oh that's why it's so beautiful when untouched, glad you enjoyed...

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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