Visit The Kiss/Romantic Train

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    I can only think of Jesse James with the heart of John Keats...

    Visit The Kiss/Romantic Train

    In the memory there is a ticket


    We don’t want Hawaii, we want lost

    We are living in love with ole’ frost

    The shirtless current has taken some joy

    Look through the eyes of an American boy


    Love be the one to tell him when to go

    To return to the her kiss that he knows

    Love, please, put your arms around them

    To feel the loving spirit is a luxurious gem


    His gothic dreams

    are only a train ride away,

    to the breathtaking

    scene he aims to embrace

    Her doth’n gleam

    resembles her found soul,

    with a promise of

    togetherness they do hold


    the kiss, on the romantic train

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    lynx002 commented on Visit The Kiss/Romantic Train

    12-21-2009

    Fantastic imagery and of course your rhyme style peaks in performance as usual...well done
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    WordSlinger

    12/21/2009

    Lynx, guess what, I am taking time to read all your writes, asap, ok, bare with me, ty WS

    optimistic commented on Visit The Kiss/Romantic Train

    12-11-2009

    This reminds me of a trip in the train listening to soothing music watching the mountains and the flowers that pass by.
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    WordSlinger

    12/12/2009

    Cool, i like that, Sylvester, thank you So much, WS

    dangedmanjr commented on Visit The Kiss/Romantic Train

    12-10-2009

    Being a HUGE fan of steamies...I can only close my eyes and dream ...however the closed eys and reading part is a bit tricky...Another hit for the home team!
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    WordSlinger

    12/12/2009

    lol, i hear that, lol, ty WS

    Hampton commented on Visit The Kiss/Romantic Train

    12-10-2009

    Quite a write John. It joins the romantic lure of the train with love in a most beautiful fashion.
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    WordSlinger

    12/10/2009

    Good Morning Hampton, it's good to see you here again, love your comments and time, WS

    Madelynn commented on Visit The Kiss/Romantic Train

    12-10-2009

    John-this leaves me speechless! 'His gothic dreams are only a train ride away, to the breathtaking scene he aims to embrace' I can't wait to take this trip- You and a fast train,for days and days,WhewWee,buckle up,Jack!lol -there is no other I would want to get lost and read poetry with.Another great-you American Boy,you!!- (your still my Irish,though!)
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    WordSlinger

    12/10/2009

    Maddi thank God I'm a country boy, lol, with gothic dreams, JohnEJack,on the Train, Train, taking us out of us out of this town. with the women I;m in love with. Lord, we've got to go, :X John E Cherryseed, ;)

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