Vacant Houses

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    In times like these, more than ever,
    we need to fill ourselves and homes with the grace of love
    Another John E WordSlinger WordSketch! :X

    Vacant Houses

    Madelynn faced the blindless window
    Only I was conceded to look inside
    her place of thoughts

     
    Her head and hands were, upon the sill, low
    An empty space of need. Low in loneliness,
    hidden high in desire


    The sunshine-echoed kiss; splashes love, as I-
    her passion's deed, being within her housescape
    of Goddess attire

     
    She looked like gasped air, when she noticed I
    sexually envisioned her. She knew I'd be her feed,
     before she breathed me in


    An eager hearted breathing, winded us with intake
    Our poem became a read. Her poesy pocket fell open,
    my poetic pen fell in


    We kissed, with our greenish blue soul lenses,
    Love had sown it's chaste' seed. Our spiritual beats
     enhanced, fulfiling our vacant senses and dreams




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    bloomingsun commented on Vacant Houses

    12-29-2009

    Fascinating images and word choices. One can't help but be moved by this... wonderful!
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    WordSlinger

    12/29/2009

    Blooming Sun thank you so much, :) WS

    cousinsoren commented on Vacant Houses

    12-29-2009

    I am a bit puzzled to see the relevance of the title to the theme...............Enlighten me, WodSlinger...........................lol
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    WordSlinger

    12/29/2009

    We once was empty now we are filled TY WS

    cousinsoren commented on Vacant Houses

    12-29-2009

    WordSlinger shares onve more a very powerful creation steeped in rich metaphors. Once again his music is passionate, clear and sweet. Even the dead ought to be moved by these powerfully beautiful, subtly erotic lines : "Her poesy pocket fell open, my poet pen fell in", Truly a majestic line! Simply beautiful and breating WordSlnger's brand of speculative clarity.
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    tierra7 commented on Vacant Houses

    12-27-2009

    WOW ! i believe that even a faint whispers ...would be runnin' a temperature...Sir John...your gift to the universe is far more than unique....and totally beyond....Overwhelmin'...extremely B E A U T I F U L & F L A T T E R I N' ....Namaste ...Terra@}-'-,- (10+ )
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    WordSlinger

    12/29/2009

    Terra, i love this comment ty WS

    epiksonik commented on Vacant Houses

    12-22-2009

    You're so very potent with words here. The chivalrous tone, elegiac quality and love dappled focus is very nicely combined.
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    WordSlinger

    12/29/2009

    Ty Martin WS

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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