The Greatest Story Untold (Trio of Life)

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They call these three,,, the three wise men
I call them the Trio of Life

Here is a youtube video to the House of Bread

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H8h1AajxczU

The Greatest Story Untold (Trio of Life)

Long ago, through the Desire of Ages

Gaspar, Balthasar, and Melchior-

kept a secret from times’ pages

With no known performed miracles,
  note their faith

The philosophers of the realm did smirch

The clearer transcript of truth

In their dreams they did search-
 the new seed of love

The Jacob Star, the time prophecy of Daniel

The luminous western heavens was all above-

The guiding star appeared in the sky,
 like a fiery circus animal

And led them to the road, breaking down, deep into the valley,

occupying the fruitful summit
 of the Judean Mountains

Celestial phenomena was predicting
 the fountain

The fountain of life of all humanity,
 an expectation world wide

The coming of a great, supernaturally begotten Prophet high

The one who has already invested,
 invested in all of life

As they came to the house of bread,
they heard the babe cry

They looked at each other, and asked, How-

How is your faith now?

They had seen the greatest of Kings

Falling to their knees they gave gifts of things,

frankincense, mirth, and gold

They kept what they have seen to themselves

They departed
 with the Greatest Story Untold

They did not return
to where the envious King dwelt

Now, we have the choice
 of everlasting life to behold

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cousinsoren commented on The Greatest Story Untold (Trio of Life)

12-30-2009

Celestially told, scripturally and graphically perfect. The"Trio Of Life" ,according to Matthew 2, did not accede to Herod's request to report to him ,shoukd they fiind the infant king. TT They hurriedly departed from Bethlehem by a different road. Matthew tells the Nativity story like a Hans Anderson's fairy tale. I like WordSliger's poetic version of this beautiful gift to the world. He narrates the story with appropriate spiritual, moral and reverent interpretation and intonation. I am delighted. Rating for entrancing narrative style .....10++

WordSlinger

12/30/2009

Oren thank you , I love this story, I had to write it, :) :) :) ty WS

bloomingsun commented on The Greatest Story Untold (Trio of Life)

12-08-2009

Wow, this is amazing. A wonderful telling of the Nativity story from the angle of the Magi. I really like this and have made it a favorite! Well done (applause)

WordSlinger

12/08/2009

BLoomingSun, Thank you so much, favs, huh, wow, I tried my best with an amazing story, ty WS

HarverTomsson commented on The Greatest Story Untold (Trio of Life)

12-08-2009

Even free verse feels more poetic when there is a solitary rhyme to end it all, and linger like a suffuse aftertaste on memory. Great stuff WS, btw there is a classic book on the life of Christ called "Desire of Ages." Ever read it? And no, no names are attributed to the famous magi. That was O. Henry's contribution.

WordSlinger

12/08/2009

HT, no I haven't, thanks for the heads up, well O"Henry did good lol, I like names, Ht, thanks so so much, I thought you'd like it, ty WS

bandit1192 commented on The Greatest Story Untold (Trio of Life)

12-03-2009

Had to view this at 150% to get the concetration it deserved. Well done, WS. Your re-telling of a classic story is exceptional. I needed this to kick my holiday spirit into gear. Merry Christmas to you and your's. TS

WordSlinger

12/03/2009

Bandit I have to really hand it to you, you are the Calmist Poet, and voice I have met here, I admire that so much with your poetry, We are Blessed, ty WS

Bettysrainbow48 commented on The Greatest Story Untold (Trio of Life)

12-03-2009

This is so beauitful. you are a very blessed poet.

WordSlinger

12/05/2009

Betty, thank you so much, I like it when you leave comments ty WS

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