The Ways They Breathe

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This is a write in appreciation to the one I love, that I deeply listen to, thank you, Another WordSketch, by John E WordSlinger

The Ways They Breathe


The radio plays a youthful soul felt love song.
Feeling the thoughts, and desires of long ago.
There is a part that touches deeply into your soul.
Telling you, there is someone where your love
belongs. As we all go through life staying strong
and fun. One day you step outside, and along
comes the one. The tone of their voice rushes
through your skin. The message is to rejoice,
to cherish all that has been. They are your hearts
thieve in all the ways they breathe. You can feel
it in your thoughts resting
into your dreams. You
love it when they talk to you, not just to here the
story; to hear them breathe, to hear the life in
them, and by all their means. It truly makes you
want to play the song again and sing it to them.
To smile, showing the one, they are the one you truly
love, and have been waiting for, your entire life.
You can hear the love in the way they breathe.
 That's when you know a love is true.
In the ways they breathe.
Just listen.




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Dcoy commented on The Ways They Breathe

02-03-2010

This a true and touching write...Thank you for sharing it...

WordSlinger

02/05/2010

your are welcome, thank you so much, WS

Charlie23 commented on The Ways They Breathe

02-01-2010

This is a beautiful poem! I think it is amazing for all who are lucky enough to find their soul mate in their lifetime. To find the one who completes them would be the perfect love...

WordSlinger

02/05/2010

Charlie, thanks, Madelynn is amazing, yes complete for sure, ty WS

knight4696 commented on The Ways They Breathe

02-01-2010

Well Sling! The romantic heart breathes love for his woman! and quite the catch she is I might add! lol! :) I'm sure Maddi melted after reading this one ; ) Nice work bro! :) Ken

WordSlinger

02/05/2010

thank you Ken, lol, yes she is, :) WS

dahlusion commented on The Ways They Breathe

01-29-2010

The rush of breath from one mouth to another, the sweet lingering juice of a kiss, a whimpering surrender in the arms of heat... wet, steamy, and heavenly.

WordSlinger

01/29/2010

Thank you Dah, you are so awesome, :) WS

Springsize commented on The Ways They Breathe

01-29-2010

ooooooh, I see... you and Madelyn... and these praises to her, so nice...to the two of you... beathing now as one, in out, she breathes out her day and you breathe in all she has to say... of course, you exhale devotion and she inhales your electric motion, back and forth... not really, but a little, it reminds me of George Burns and his Gracie... sometimes you can just look at two and see how they fit so perfectly together, as if they're a completed puzzle that's always been.

WordSlinger

01/29/2010

Springsize, this comment is so cool. I'm am actually wordless to this, but very happy, thank you so much, :) I'll have to google the George and Gracie, I remember a little when I was a youngster, ty WS

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