The Poem That Meant A Lot

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Have you ever heard a love song, and thought of the one you love, and you missed them so much, their touch? Another Wordsketch by John E WordSlinger

The Poem That Meant A Lot

It was written from a pulse near the spine

From a notion of hope that life would be fine

There was a song on the radio, that resembled our kiss

Of where the place of needing you, again for that and this


The spirit reaches out for you, you see, and when you’re

not there, the pain of missing you brings me to my faith,

and my faith brings me another day of the same

You see, the poem that meant a lot, has no name

Because the song was never heard for the one of aim


Needing some ones kiss, and needing the one now,

is crippling to the hand that holds the pen somehow

In the poets mind the words sure were fittin’

But the poem that meant a lot was never written



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Crush commented on The Poem That Meant A Lot

02-23-2010

what can i say other than that i am impressed. such a sincere, sensitive style and outlook on things and events.

WordSlinger

02/23/2010

Crush thank you WS

poett commented on The Poem That Meant A Lot

02-17-2010

This is so true that a pen helps when one has a need to express loneliness felt when missing someone. It helps to write sentiments that can't ever be filled. I love your poems and way of making me think. You make my mind go beyond. lol

WordSlinger

02/17/2010

lol, Thank you, thank me Job, lol, ty WS

TheShowMan commented on The Poem That Meant A Lot

02-15-2010

Wow man this is very well written story, you have a rhyming flow like my stories. 20 comments isnt somebody Mister popular over there LOL. Thanks for reading my latest story man.

WordSlinger

02/16/2010

The Show Man, Op's Show Man, thank you WS

kmooney commented on The Poem That Meant A Lot

02-15-2010

Another interesting piece. I liked the idea here. It flows nicely, has good cadence and a nice rhyme scheme. Sounds to me like you may have been a bit bored when you wrote it. Sometimes simply sitting down and writing about whatever comes to mind stimulates thought and results in something special. Something about this I liked. Thanks for sharing. Kevin

WordSlinger

02/15/2010

Kevin, thank you, WS

Tempestlady commented on The Poem That Meant A Lot

02-13-2010

Some folly and philosophy with a bit of nostalgia mixed in for good measure. Some lovesickness and regret to thicken the sauce, a meal made for a poet who's pens been lost. Write on....

WordSlinger

02/13/2010

A stew of some sorts, lol, Thanks,, glad to see ya back, :) ty WS

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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