Call Out Forever, Before Forever Calls

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Have you ever seen the ending to the movie The Time Machine? How did you feel? If you had the power to to travel time where would you go? Who would you visit? Think about that before time takes you to a place where you where you can never go back to change a situation. I 'am going to play here in time so, take this ride, and tell all your poet friends to read this. You will see where I shall take you in my comments. Thank you, Another WordSketch By John E WordSlinger

Call Out Forever, Before Forever Calls

Call out forever, before forever calls


In between the bond and the vow

It can be heard, an asking to jointly rise

And to each we are allowed to speak

For all, to hear our cry


We all bleed deep, a certain need

We can give each other all, our best in life

And discreetly we feel to be free

A desired glorify


To forsake, and no longer take

Is not to execute the promise we make,

So then, we all greet with a hidden goodbye

So I ask, when you spend time with love

To teach each other to fly!

For that is sharing life

The map to happiness is it a myth

like a stolen treasure?

The gap out of sadness is it a fist

with a longer measure?

So I ask, to the short time that we have here?

To unleash the truth within us all

To truly spend time with love,

So that love really feels above forever’s call

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ginga commented on Call Out Forever, Before Forever Calls

12-30-2009

Wordslinger, The delivery here questions the reader. I say that forever should always be in the moment...otherwise why ae we here? And I agree make the best of love ....this poem warms my heart,ty WS. ginga

WordSlinger

02/08/2010

Travel the road of love it leads to everywhere, ty WS

epiksonik commented on Call Out Forever, Before Forever Calls

12-29-2009

John, this may be the closest thing I've read here that defines the truth about love. Bravo. "we all greet with a hidden goodbye"

WordSlinger

02/08/2010

Travel the road of love it leads to everywhere, ty WS

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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