Girly Girl...

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I wrote this about a friend who i thought could be a boyfriend. But the control began and i realized he will never be my man. He's all about looks and appearence and money and all that i hate. i figuere God made me ugly and that is the way i will be. I don't care what people say and think about me. We're all human! Man and women a world we may never understand.

Girly Girl...

So you want me to be a girly, Girl?
What's wrong with my appearence to this world?
A girly girl is not who I am and not who i will ever be!
You have to learn to accept me for me!
I will do my best to make you happy,
If you promise to satisfy me too and love me.
So you taught me to put on make- up
and change my hair,
I'm supposed to worry about other peoples
thoughts and cares...
You have left me speechless and breathless, ran out of words
I no longer dwell on the past that I've witnessed,
Or worry about the bad things that I've heard...
You may be older then me but Love is not what I see,
Age doesn't matter and you have set my spirit free...
Thank- You for trying to help me Johnny...,
But you are not the one for me and we could never be!!!!


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alexander316 commented on Girly Girl...

03-22-2010

i love the positivity and the desire to remain independent even though you are in the process of pleasing someone you love. you asked me once if love was a strong word to throw around and it looks like you are strong enough to handle it.excellent poem of self discovery and desire to br caring and cared for.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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