I Got A Feeling...

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i AM TIRED!!! SSSSSLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPP IS WHAT I NEED. JUST SOME THOUGHT AND TRUTH ....

I Got A Feeling...

So, have you ever felt like this before?
Where your loved and gently touched,
and kissed like never before,
Where your not treated like a maid or a whore?

It's a feeling so strong even though
history says it's wrong, but who are they
to say where your heart belongs?
They haven't a clue what I've been missing all along..

A feeling that I never expected to be true,
A kiss that leaves me with the taste of your sweetness,
A touch so soft and gentle that begins and ends with you,
Your eyes so magnetic and pure, Heavenly Bliss I call it..!

A feeling you have created so deep and strong,
One I know, is the complete opposite from being wrong..
It get's confusing with the severity of the complication,
The wish of her to suddenly dissapear and
you to stay with me here as your lover and best friend..

I love it when you grab ahold of me and pull me near,
A moment so valuable and priceless with no worry or fear..
I wouldn't trade that or your kisses for the world,
Because even if only for a short time,
I am the worlds luckiest girl!!!!

My feelings for you exceed the limit,
and I'm about to explode with all the above...
Happyness and sadness and uncontrollable love..
My eyes are wet, but the tears stay deep inside because,
I can't cry over a guy who cares not to know why..

Even though so far I don't beleive you have totally lied,
My heart is cold and it's breaking on the inside..
I do however think there is more to the truth
then what you have told me?
Denial, my friend is pure cruelty and a brick of reality..

So, shake your feelings like I'm trying to do mine.
We are already in trouble, we committed a crime..
I would do it all over again just for you to be my man..
Even if then too, we only ended up as friends...

              MY FEELINGS FOR YOU ARE
             STRONGER THEN ANYTHING... 

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Coltsfan777 commented on I Got A Feeling...

03-09-2011

Very touching poem that is well written!! We all fall into relationships where we find someone we want to be with and they mean so much to us but they don't always show it back. Love how you pour your heart out into each write. God has someone special for all of us.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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