March 27...

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This is many that I have wrote about my Mother's death. Didn't get a chance to know her like I would if she was here. I have 4 older brothers too, Jason, Conrad, juan, and Terry. But only 3 were hers and the other was my dads first son. My dad met my Mom's sister first and had Terry and then 2 yrs. after Terry was born I was born. My sisters were born in 1990, 1991, and 1992. Jennifer, Michelle and Bonita. We had no clue she was dying...? She has had heartattacks in the past, but I never thought that would be her last...

March 27...

On this day 14 yrs. ago,
My mother left us alone:(
No warnings, No signs, Just Gone...
And now a broken home:(!
My sisters so young 2, 3, and 4,
I only 12 yrs. old...
Why did she have to die for?
We have no mother to hold,
 Our hearts so cold:(!
Alot to learn and take care of
without my mother near,
Still in fear, But wishing
she was just HERE!
How I've come this far?
I do not know?
For I will always wonder
if she was poisened?
And if so,
Do I really wish to know?
She is gone forever on this earth,
Only thing I can do now
is live for all it's worth...
But I always wonder why
and what could have been?
Why did she have to leave so sudden?
Maybe she wanted more kids?
God could have taken me instead!
I miss my mom and I want her back again..
I Barely knew her almost as less as my sisters,
All that we been thru, No one will truly understand..
Our pain and silence of a long lost friend we barely knew, 
Our Mom who we really did look up too..
All these questions,
I'll ask when I get to Heaven:)!
My mind at ease and there will be peace,
And Finally, this torture will END!

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TilMyLastBreath commented on March 27...

07-02-2011

I like this poem because your sharing with us the reader's a painful memory with out ending your poem in a suicide as a solution or blaming anybody, instead you handle it and tie the Poem into GOD. Great work!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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