In Hot-Pursuit Of Happiness

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Constructive critiques and analysis are always welcome! I'm in hot-pursuit of happiness...

In Hot-Pursuit Of Happiness

Break through the sUbcOncIOUs
And the overbearing
Mold
For this life shall have
      More spontaneity
Than a sitcom p a s t  i t 's p r i m e .
In a field of flowers and grains,
      We'll run with singing
Chimes
      Clanking, ringing--reverberate--
And this life shall be first-rate!
No doors or doorbells,
      But empty doorframes;
No misery or fame but some constant
Little games
      To pick and choose and play
With pure imagination
And a pinch of i m p r o v i s i o n
      To transform what is seen
To see what is
    Desired
Because everything that is--
Is a chance
A t  H a p p i n e s s !

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Tyme commented on In Hot-Pursuit Of Happiness

07-19-2010

Fading, it's so true, "...everything that is-- Is a chance A t H a p p i n e s s !" So often during teh bad times, ( and biy can they get bad) we fail to see the silver lining in the clouds because our pain os so strong. many times I've lost opportunities to catch the happiness passing me by because of my focus. I'm learning though to see-k and trust God in EVERYTHING so those moments don't go by unnoticed.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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