Cocoon

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  • Confusion
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  • Change
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  • Life

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    "You say that I've been changing, that I'm not just simply aging, yeah how could that be logical?"

    Cocoon

    The sheilded body is slow
    to open up its eyes.


    They taught me everything I knew,
    then changed all the rules; Good-bye.


    My face was cradled by the softer ones,
    saying "it's just not your time."


    I once marched in step, then through
    me something flew. Well why?


    The vulnerable body shakes as it opens,
    the door sliding forth. They lied.

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Cocoon

    01-12-2011

    I like the use of metaphores to explain the situation and how things changed to accomadate the other party.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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