The Little Things

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    For this poem my friend gave me a title, and I wrote a poem based on the title. I like how it turned out, but I feel like it could've been better. Oh well, its still a cutesy poem. What do you guys think?

    The Little Things

     It's the little things that bother me
    Long after they began.
    It's the little things that hinder me
    That blind my confidence.
    It's the little things that people say
    That I just can't let go.
    It's the little things from day to day
    That make me just erode.

    It's the little things you always say
    That build me up again.
    It's the little things you do for me
    That I never can forget.
    It's the little things we always play
    That make me laugh and grin.
    It's the little things from day to day
    That make me love you so!

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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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