A Twist In My Bend

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  • Confusion

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    A Twist In My Bend

    All eyes staring,
    There's nothing to see.
    I turn to glass,
    And they see through me.
    It's all let out,
    My stomach's in pain.
    I run away,
    Though it's all in vain.
    I find myself
    In the strangest place;
    I look in the mirror
    But I can't find a face.
    There's no return,
    Nothing is safe.
    We go circles 'round
    With two roller-skates;
    For the weather today,
    The clouds contemplate.
    Sunrise to sunset,
    We carry our weight.
    Life upside-down
    Is a scary fate.

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    AlysonAlive commented on A Twist In My Bend

    07-03-2010

    Its really emotional and I find that a great thing. ^_^ I connect with the struggle.
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    FadingFebruary

    07/14/2010

    I'm glad you like it, and I'm even more glad that you connect with my writing. I always like writing that I connect to.

    Merlyn commented on A Twist In My Bend

    06-27-2010

    Well, Fading, I can say you have a good style, in my humble opinion. I knew you were young by your angst. Never fear, as you age, the clouds clear and you will see a face you can love in your mirror.
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    FadingFebruary

    07/03/2010

    That made me laugh so hard--"I knew you were young by your angst." But it made me laugh in a good way. I definately agree. Now I have this silly grin and I'm laughing to myself. But I really appreciate the compliment; I always strive to have a good style.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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