Airplane

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    uh i had to write this for school and it got published in a book called celebration of poets. i hope you all like it

    Airplane

    My Grandma,

    she is the engine

    she helps me go

    to places

    I never dreamed of going.

     

    My Mom,

    she is the wings

    she keeps me

    and my spirit lifted high

    so I soar above above my problems.

     

    My Aunt,

    she is the fuel

    she helps me keep going

    and never stopping until I go where I want to be

     

    My Grandpa,

    he is the windows

    he helps me see

    places and things

    that are new and amazing to my eyes.

     

    My brother,

    he is the fuselage

    he keeps me inside my dreams

    so I will never forget them

    I am safe inside a new world.

     

     

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    brandice commented on Airplane

    10-30-2010

    hey i like it its really good i never thought of family like that wow COOL

    Dano commented on Airplane

    10-08-2010

    very inspriational... dreams are important... keep your head in the clouds and your feet on the ground... life is too short to give up your dreams

    DarkDreams commented on Airplane

    10-08-2010

    wow,... this is amazing, your a wonderful writer.. i love this poem

    Musicmynded1 commented on Airplane

    09-01-2010

    Very nicely put,,,, dont pay much thought to what Bluepetal just said,,,, what he meant was... most ppl when growing up get in that big rush rush rush and forget about their dreams and plans... but ppl like you and i wont,,, cause just like the Plane, we take everything in stride and in its time... good poem.. very good.

    bluepetal commented on Airplane

    08-05-2010

    i like this it works very well but one day everyone wakes up

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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