I'm the Girl*

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Well i patterned this after a student poem called "I am the Girl" by Tiana Wright. well this is all true i hope you all like it....

I'm the Girl*

 

I'm the girl who waits for the sad ending, not happily ever after

Who actually wants to see sadness spread

The girl who cries as the sun comes up

I'm the girl who daydreams into the music

The one who tries to live in her dreams

Thinks every dream is possible

As long as you try

I'm the girl who loves love but hats loves effect

The girl that bottles up her troubles

And writes her heart out

The one who is always helping others but never herself

I'm the girl who dreams of a day that happiness will shine through

And make its way to my heart

I'm the girl who waits for people to come

The girl that tries to see the best in everything

Who is acceptable to most

Once in a while she is loved

I'm the girl who tries to help herself

But ends up getting hurt

The girl who never wants to grow up

So life will never end

 

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ImStillHere commented on I'm the Girl*

10-03-2010

i kept pressing like like 50 million times, so you know this is awesome :) write on. ~Audrey

SpawnofSatan commented on I'm the Girl*

09-04-2010

I can relate to this really easily. Great poem. Keep rocking!

Beth1703 commented on I'm the Girl*

08-25-2010

A great write to which i can closely relate keep writing Sk8

latinangel commented on I'm the Girl*

08-25-2010

Awesome reminds me of my feelings when I was a teenager. Great read.

bluepetal commented on I'm the Girl*

08-05-2010

does she want to have a good life or a bad one thats the thing its like one minit she wants to see darkness the next she wants light to her heart twisted minded

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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