Star-Crossed Lovers

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Inspired by a photo I saw.

Star-Crossed Lovers

Two teenagers, dancing in the rain, laughter preserved in stone.

No worries about the fading moonlight, or the lightening in the distance.

Glistening eyes brightened by love.

Her hair is caught being blown in the breeze,

and a little girl and her mom watch them from across the street.

Just the two hearts, together with the stars,

and the falling diamonds.

 

Someone said, “ Anyone who says sunshine brings happiness

has never danced in the rain.”

 

They look up at the falling rain, and look at the time,

a frown coming to his face.

Laughter grows louder as they make the most of their short time together.

The pair will be that way forever.

Each has a life of wonder and love left.

Both of them longing to be together forever.

Each of them remembered by that one mesmerizing photograph. ♥

 

 

 

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Tony5880 commented on Star-Crossed Lovers

02-01-2013

This poem was very romantic some what heart felt lovers enjoying each moments in time

sk8erpoet

02/01/2013

Thank you

dahlusion commented on Star-Crossed Lovers

01-31-2013

"Both of them longing to be together forever. Each of them remembered by that one mesmerizing photograph. ♥—beautiful ending! —bravo!

sk8erpoet

01/31/2013

Thank you.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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