It's Only Me

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well i wrote this for my friend....

It's Only Me

 

I look different than I did before

I look like more of a monster than a person

Death has taken its tole on me

I now walk around

Scars on my arms, tears in my eyes

I regret everything I did but still needed to do it

I may look like the walking dead

But it's only me

I'm still the same person only with a different mind.

I never meant to hurt you or make you feel sorry for me

I just wanted the pain to stop

But I made it worse

No matter what I do the memories will always stay

right by my side until the day I die

Underneath all of this darkness

It's only me

 

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HatedPhoenix commented on It's Only Me

11-07-2010

Wow...I can honestly say I relate to this on the deepest emotional level..very good poem

kmooney commented on It's Only Me

10-11-2010

Very heartfelt and real. I really like this poem. I'm sure many can relate. Thanks for sharing...Kevin

Dano commented on It's Only Me

10-08-2010

its always hard to convince people that you are the same on the inside when there is an obvious outward change... i know alittle bit about what you are talking about and i can relate... thanks for sharing

DarkDreams commented on It's Only Me

10-08-2010

Very good :3 i like how u describe your self as a monster on the outside, but inside its still you. simply amazing.

koolmom0 commented on It's Only Me

10-06-2010

Very well written. You are turning into a wonderful writer. :) Koolmom0

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