Black

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eh its just something i thought of......enjoy

Black

 

Black is the color of death,

Black is the feeling of failure,

Black is the color of my heart,

Black is the taste of capture,

Black is the sound of crying,

Black is the feeling of being abandoned,

Black is the taste of separation,

Black is the color of roses

Black is the smell of a decaying heart,

Black is the night with no moon,

Black is the feeling of regret,

Black is the color of a raven,

Black is the taste of judgment,

Black is the feeling of love

Black is the sound of a loveless world,

Black is the blood of a murderer,

Black is the smell of a child abuser,

Black is the taste of victory,

Black is the heart of wars outcome,

Black is the sound of men dying in war,

And black is the soul I will be...forever

 

 

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Musicmynded1 commented on Black

03-07-2011

i like the concept.. wats weird is that just the other day i wrote a song entitled *Devils Toy? (This is Gods Black ink)*

DyFriend02 commented on Black

02-27-2011

Nicely writen.... you got a gift keep on writing. P.S Christianprep

Shelbylolann commented on Black

02-16-2011

10 ALL THE WAY! I enjoied this, as much as I love the color black... As Ninja said.. a bit of irony. Black is a beautiful color because of some of those things... I dont believe you have a black soul but It is a great perspective on it. I loved it. :) Great write. Love shelby

Ninjaboy commented on Black

02-16-2011

sis i like this one, though i shall tell you a little bit of irony, i like darkness and such, but i HATE the color black, its kinda funny to me, anyway, 10 here

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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