You...

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well it explains itself.....

You...

Every time someone says something to me

it always starts with you..

you are a failure

you are dumb

you are better off dead

you don't know anything

you are a disappointment

you are nothing

I just want to give up

I want to hear something positive

all I know is that

they don't hate me

but they don't love me

finally from the person I least expected to say

something possible

they said,”i love you.”

finally a sentence came

that ends with you

now that is all I hear

I love you...

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hisyanna commented on You...

12-08-2010

ahhhh yes!!!! i love this so much =) A+++ i dont love that comments have 2 be 50 characters lol

Musicmynded1 commented on You...

09-17-2010

Very well put into works are these thoughts of urs from ur heart.

Embraced commented on You...

09-15-2010

wow, this one was personal and I am honored you shared it. YOU ARE WONDERFUL, and never let anyone tell different. We are flawed in some way, yet I believe perfect in others. Keep writing, kiddo! E~

jj1562 commented on You...

08-30-2010

you are not a failure you aren't dumb; I mean how many people at ur school can say they write great poetry that's been seen by hundreds of poeple? not many i bet

lonewolf commented on You...

08-26-2010

You are a wonderful young lady. You have your own dreams that you need to follow. You have people who love you, even if they dont say it. You are smart, and you are not a failure. You are not better off dead, because we need your contribution to society. And we all love YOU here at O.P. and we're glad YOU are a part of our family.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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