My Life

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    i wrote this after finding out one of my friends passed away from suicide..but i know its something that happens alot to alot of people..i hope you all enjoy

    My Life

    I feel the pain at this very moment

    I think of what it was like when we were both alive

    now I feel like the world has come to an end

    as I hold the gun to my head, my finger on the trigger

    I think of you

    I think am I doing the right thing?

    I don't answer myself

    I push the trigger

    I see my life without you flash in front of me

    then I don't feel anything

    I walk into a lighted doorway

    I see you walking towards me

    now I know my life has ended

    at least I will be with you again

    at least I died like you did

    suicide has taken our lives

    we should have died with dignity

    I guess our suffering has ended

    let us be happy where we are now

    hell.

     

    ~ in memory of all that died in suicide~

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    darknessbird commented on My Life

    05-04-2011

    dam this is great cause u know i lost a friend to sucide .... so thank u for that great piece of work and it was amazing

    boomboom56 commented on My Life

    03-18-2011

    scary and sad at the same time. you captured some very strong emotions in this writing. may they all rest in piece.

    phantom commented on My Life

    03-17-2011

    dame this gave me chills while i was reading it .....love the way you put this together and rest in peace to those who died from suciecide ......great write

    nam1292 commented on My Life

    03-16-2011

    this is amazing sis, strong words for a very powerful topic. im proud of all that have fought and pushed against. remeber that i am always here if u need to talk. great write, keep em coming sissy

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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