Blood and Tears

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well i wrote this poem....when i was just thinking......well enjoy

Blood and Tears

The blood I shed

when I cut

is because of you

you left me with suicide

and now I want to

be with you.

 

The tears I shed

when I think of the past

is because of you

those aren't tears of joy

they're of sorrow

but they will soon end.

 

Sometimes the tears

turn to blood

because of the pain

you caused

I can't wipe away these tears

but soon I will be tearless in the ground.

 

Soon I will be with you

down below

where you can wipe away my tears

and stop the blood

just keep looking up for me

for I will be with you soon.”

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leigh14 commented on Blood and Tears

10-24-2010

O_O wow! that is all i can say! it is sad that one so young has been through the things that would cause this kind of outpouring from the heart. but i do say that if you ever need to talk i am here... i can imagine the pain and if i am right on what this is about then i can tell you how i was able to cope... my Best guy friend committed suicide and i wrote a poem and dedicated it to him, it is titled My best friend... im creaive huh... but this is about you not me... theree was much emotion put into this poem and these are the kind i like to see, they project the person who writes them, not always what the reader wants but they are unique in that sense... great write. Leigh

winterkou commented on Blood and Tears

09-21-2010

a sad look at love and loss, dark write, overall nice write

Chaos128 commented on Blood and Tears

09-20-2010

A winding trip through darkness and despair, with cobwebs and everything; and rooms best not entered. You can spin a tale, Sk8ter *o*

LadyLuck commented on Blood and Tears

09-20-2010

Just what the doctor ordered! Its Dark in the whole entirety of the word. Dismal and dreary, sad the pain radiated through the poem is enough to make past wound open their red mouths and breathe deep Favorite!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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