The Chance

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well this was just a little poem..it isnt perfect because it isnt really a poem....me and my friend michelle (whom is on here) were just talking and it turned into a poem..i liked it so i posted it..you be the judge..

The Chance

If only there was a chance

then the dreams we live in would all come true

and the world has peace

people are people as well as friends...

and the world will turn

round and round

and never stop until

people begin to understand they need to fight

or else they will lose their dreams

and forget their future

still they just argue

and listen

to the lies of everyone

and hear the truth

of no one...

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bubba commented on The Chance

12-13-2010

wow very wonderful it makes you think which is good not many people these days think for themselves i agree people need to fight to keep their dreams dreams are all we have and they are very dear to everyone even those who dont know it

kakurenbo commented on The Chance

12-08-2010

Beautiful write. And so true.. Great poem sk8 : )

phantom commented on The Chance

11-24-2010

great write so deep.........and yeah if only was peace......bu

Chaos128 commented on The Chance

11-19-2010

This poem delivers a message the whole world should listen to. Great work, Sk8er : )

Dano commented on The Chance

11-17-2010

poetry created through human interaction... it took a keen eye to realize what you were talking about could turn into poetry... nicely done

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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