Something

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Something

There are whispers in the air a
nd a pounding through the ground.
Something tells me I shouldn't care,
that i'm still safe and sound.

Theres fire burning in my head
and I cannot catch my heart.
Something tells me I should be dead,
that I was supposed to be gone from the start.

There's glitter raining from the sky
and blood is pooling at my wrists.
Something tells me it's all a lie
that nothing true exists.

Right from the start
I was always torn apart

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slimgoodwoody commented on Something

02-16-2013

You write so well for such a young person but age does not make one a poet either, does it? Great poem!

sk8erpoet

02/16/2013

Thank you, very much. And you're right, it doesn't.

dancinghawk commented on Something

02-14-2013

beautiful exploration of the tensions that make us human ... dramatic images from a questioning heart

sk8erpoet

02/14/2013

Thank you.

dahlusion commented on Something

02-14-2013

"Theres fire burning in my head and I cannot catch my heart"—the imagery created here is received with such perfect pain. And then this closing is like a knot of flesh throbbing with confusion: "Right from the start I was always torn apart" —bravo!

dahlusion

02/14/2013

"Theres" should be "There's"

sk8erpoet

02/14/2013

Thank you, very much.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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