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    This poem means nothing.

    He

    He can melt my heart with just one smile

    and he only shows you what he wants you to see.

    He'll always go that extra mile

    to do the things that need to be done.

    Maybe he could win if he wanted to

    but none of that matters to him

    No matter the things he has been through

    He will never give up.

    Call him a name and he won't do anything

    If someone he loves is silently crying

    you know that he'll reach out and sing

    anything just to get them to smile.

    He's frequently kind, but suddenly he's cruel.

    All that he'll do if throw fire at you

    But me? I must be an exception to that rule

    He's always a gentleman to me.

    Just look at him and he'll bring out the best

    his gaze just looks right through you

    until you can't help but get the pain off your chest

    No matter what, he'll just listen.

    He'll promise you more then what you've been dreaming

    all of that and more will come true

    he can cut you and laugh at you bleeding

    but he's always an angel to me...

     

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    jj1562 commented on He

    05-08-2012

    I can tell you really love him best of luck luv u ~JJ

    sk8erpoet

    05/08/2012

    Thanks, but it wasn't about anyone really. Just inspired by songs and other things.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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