I Miss You

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well i wrote this for my friend...he is only 14 and he already lost his whole family......his mother and all.....this is for you trent

I Miss You

I miss you

and love you

with all my heart

I thought you loved me too

but I guess not

you gave up on me

you gave up on yourself

I already lost

a grandfather

a father

a grandmother

an uncle

and now

a mother

the day you died

I asked to be alone

and that is what

everyone did

I listened to

all the music

you liked

now I

cry all day

cry all night

over you

I just want to say

something

I really love you

and appreciate

all you did for me

you were a great mom

you may not know it

but you did

everything right as a parent

even though I am only fourteen

I know I love you forever

and I will do what you expect of me

to be strong for you and myself

I miss you

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KING commented on I Miss You

11-13-2010

i hope it all works out for you in the end. Alot fo what you speak of reminds me som uch of my past as a teen which was a very difficult time. We all wonder where the healing is at. Sometimes i feel it is not always there. But this piece is deep and from the soul. Fight for your freedom, that is all i can tell you. I did it when i was your age and it was a hell, but little by little i became Mr. independent. Sort of. I am also sorry for your loss. Peace be with you firend.

sk8erpoet

11/13/2010

hey thank you...it was my friends mom that passed away....but thank you...i wasnt really close to her but it was still hard...

Musicmynded1 commented on I Miss You

11-01-2010

A very nice emotion created for a friend... nice how you got inside of him to be able to convey. God bless the boy, and God bless you too.

WingedWolf commented on I Miss You

10-21-2010

i love this, it reminds me of what my best friend is going through as well... beautiful write, 10 from me.

Kanicki commented on I Miss You

10-11-2010

Bittersweet and Beautifully written; this poem is too a tribute to Trent. What touches the heart reaches the heart...heartfelt. Peace Light and love

CDWillams commented on I Miss You

10-04-2010

Wow. Very emotional. I really can relate to the feeling of despair for sure.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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