I Miss You


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well i wrote this for my friend...he is only 14 and he already lost his whole family......his mother and all.....this is for you trent

I Miss You

I miss you

and love you

with all my heart

I thought you loved me too

but I guess not

you gave up on me

you gave up on yourself

I already lost

a grandfather

a father

a grandmother

an uncle

and now

a mother

the day you died

I asked to be alone

and that is what

everyone did

I listened to

all the music

you liked

now I

cry all day

cry all night

over you

I just want to say


I really love you

and appreciate

all you did for me

you were a great mom

you may not know it

but you did

everything right as a parent

even though I am only fourteen

I know I love you forever

and I will do what you expect of me

to be strong for you and myself

I miss you

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KING commented on I Miss You


i hope it all works out for you in the end. Alot fo what you speak of reminds me som uch of my past as a teen which was a very difficult time. We all wonder where the healing is at. Sometimes i feel it is not always there. But this piece is deep and from the soul. Fight for your freedom, that is all i can tell you. I did it when i was your age and it was a hell, but little by little i became Mr. independent. Sort of. I am also sorry for your loss. Peace be with you firend.



hey thank you...it was my friends mom that passed away....but thank you...i wasnt really close to her but it was still hard...

Musicmynded1 commented on I Miss You


A very nice emotion created for a friend... nice how you got inside of him to be able to convey. God bless the boy, and God bless you too.

WingedWolf commented on I Miss You


i love this, it reminds me of what my best friend is going through as well... beautiful write, 10 from me.

Kanicki commented on I Miss You


Bittersweet and Beautifully written; this poem is too a tribute to Trent. What touches the heart reaches the heart...heartfelt. Peace Light and love

CDWillams commented on I Miss You


Wow. Very emotional. I really can relate to the feeling of despair for sure.

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