Darkness

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uh this was from a time in my life that i was really sad and didn't know what to do when no one loved me

Darkness

As I look into to past

I walk into the darkness

of my mind

that goes on forever

black as night.

 

The darkness

is the brightest part

of my life

all of the things are highlighted in black.

 

In my garden

there are only black roses

with droplets of blood

instead of water

and the sun never shines on them.

 

As I look into

the darkness of my mind

I see you walking towards me

a knife, and heart

in hand.

 

I walk into the

tunnel of darkness

and see a light at the end

but I keep walking and walking

but never make it to the light

I just stay in the darkness

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Beth1703 commented on Darkness

08-25-2010

Sk8 very emotional i feel for this person again keep writing your a great poet.

bluepetal commented on Darkness

08-05-2010

its like a never ending path to find that inner light in the darkness but no one has found it to prove it

JayJ420 commented on Darkness

07-23-2010

My one fear iz the dark....haha idk why but its jst scary....It was a good visual poem "black"....reminds me of my hard times being depressed....

rainyxsun commented on Darkness

07-14-2010

Wow.. That was amazing.... The part where the person had a knife and a heart was so... Heartbreaking. Great poem.

brokenhearted11 commented on Darkness

07-08-2010

love it!................................................................ keep writing:)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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