Dream

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its not really supposed to mean anything..i just thought id try a new style

Dream

Dream that everything will be alright

we will be together,

and gaze at the stars

as we lay side by side.

 

We will be together

our hands entwined,

as we lay side by side

dreaming.

 

Our hands entwined

as I think about us,

dreaming

as though it is able to come true.

 

As I think about us

I dream about a place,

as though it is able to come true

but I know it is impossible.

 

I dream about a place

where we can be together forever,

but I know it is impossible

still never stop dreaming.

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Tayzie commented on Dream

03-22-2011

Wow, this is really good! It has a really important meaning, and the words flow together really nicely.

Musicmynded1 commented on Dream

03-07-2011

Woah.. workin on a style and might i say .. u nailed a great write in the midst.

Mandi commented on Dream

02-20-2011

dreamin' you're always dreamin' dreeamin', till your dreamin' comes true

sk8erpoet

02/20/2011

i love that...it is so true...never stop dreaming because then no dream will come again..

Ninjaboy commented on Dream

02-16-2011

i agree with shelby, its a great write, once again, 10 here

Shelbylolann commented on Dream

02-13-2011

Perfection, my dear. For I will always dream of you near. :) Love, Shelby.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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