My Own Personal Demon - a sestina

6 Comments

Poem Commentary

well i wrote this...i dont know why...but i did so enjoy it

My Own Personal Demon - a sestina



Everyone has their own personal demon
You never know when it will come out
And greet the world
Someday you are going to find
That behind every light, darkness
Is awaiting you

I will find you
Though you area a powerful demon
I will make it through the darkness
And have you come out
Soon you will find
There is no place for you in this world.

There is a world
That will be made just for you
It will be extremely hard to find,
You are my own demon
But soon you will come out
and meet the everlasting darkness

Poem Comments

(6)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

jj1562 commented on My Own Personal Demon - a sestina

10-20-2010

great write i agree we need to face our demons head on. --jj1562

wamomo commented on My Own Personal Demon - a sestina

10-11-2010

A very insightful write in to our own personal battles with our demons and the attitude we need to overcome them! Good job!

koolmom0 commented on My Own Personal Demon - a sestina

10-06-2010

This is so true, we all have our own personal demons. And we shall conquer them. :) Love Koolmom0

Rygar commented on My Own Personal Demon - a sestina

10-05-2010

another darkly written foray into the mind of the Sk8er! I liked it, you have some talent there chica. :-)

Musicmynded1 commented on My Own Personal Demon - a sestina

10-05-2010

i like this idea as a poem,, it seemed to me to drift a little where i couldnt stay on track about it.. but thats prbly just me.. ... i most certainly know mine all too well, and i know when it started brewing inside, and i know when it came out, and it seemed i even beacon-ed it forthright, but ohhhh sk8er.. it was at the wrong time in my life, and it seemed to have screwed up a very big part of my love life:*(

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

sk8erpoet’s Poems (135)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Insane 0
So Right 1
Story in the Stars 1
Maybe 0
New Feeling 1
Her Secret 2
Peace 3
Who He Is 1
My Looking Glass 2
March 8, 2013 2
My Wish for You 1
Homeless 3
Something 3
His Story 1
Here Again 4
Red Ribbon 2
Choose Me! 1
Star-Crossed Lovers 2
Trying to Be Okay 1
Your Words 0
Free 0
Piece Of Paper 0
Dear Diary... 0
My "Sanctuary" 6
Cut Deep 4
Three 1
The Demons 3
Clueless 1
Everyone 3
What Do I Stand For? 1
Do You Remember? 4
Found In Flames 2
Me to My Dad 4
Hatred 1
The Girl Who Never Cares 1
The Lake 1
Love 1
On My Mind 1
Just An Angel 1
Only My Reflection 0
Only Be You 0
Any Other Way 0
She Finally Understands 0
Stop Pretending 0
No Rainbows 0
Dream 0
Not a Magic Ending 0
The Tree 1
emotions 0
Have You Seen Him? 0
Secrets 2
A Moment 2
Say... 1
Blue Eyed Angel 0
Closed 0
Real Smiles 0
What She Wants 0
The Clock Ticks 0
Not Coming Home 3
Living Proof 1
What Cancer Can Do 3
Please... 1
You Say/I Say 1
He'll See 0
I Don't Understand 0
Here I Am 1
Silent Screams 3
Words Not Spoken 0
Barely 0
Broken 0
Change... 2
Hope Dreams...and Me 0
Will Not 1
Too Late 1
The Last Time 0
That Song 0
Rainbow 1
Done 3
The Letter 3
Just Live 3
I Was Wrong 0
To My Son 0
He 1
That Child 0
That Child 0
Silence 1
A Dreamless Child 2
What is the Time? 1
She 0
Contentment 0
For the Ever-Dreaming Dead 0
It's Not True 1
Untitled 1
We've Been Through It All 2
My Guiding Angel - a sestina- 1
The Company of Nothing 1
A Better Life 1
Petals of Death 2
A Day in the Life 1
My Life 4
I Don't Know... 4
Mourning an Angel 4
Dream 6
Black 4
seven ways to look at a book 4
The Midnight Beauty- a pontoon 1
The Unknown Dream 2
Sorry Love 3
If Only...* 4
See 4
Who Am I Now? 5
The Bell... 7
The Chance 8
Sunshine Filled Raindrops 8
That Time 2
That Time 3
The Long Road 13
My Own Personal Demon - a sestina 6
It's Only Me 9
I Miss You 9
Blood and Tears 5
Boredom 7
In My Dreams 4
You... 5
You Don't Know Me 17
That Perfect Dreadful Day 4
Me 3
Dark Nights 5
I'm the Girl* 6
A Soldier's Eyes 8
Darkness 13
Life Is... 5
Beauty is... 6
Anywhere 3
Airplane 14