New Feeling

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" If you're broken, I will find the pieces."

New Feeling

These words are for a broken girl

who lost it all fighting the world.

She felt the blood run down her hand,

covering her wrist like a band.

She started stealing,

to kill the feeling

of wanting to let go.

So no one could ever know.

 

She ran outside, and screamed at the night.

She yelled at the sky, to bring the light.

She screamed and cried and fell to her knees

and for the first time, in a long time...

she prayed.

She prayed to bring her daddy back.

She prayed to make her brother smile.

She prayed for all the people hurting.

She prayed to be forgiven.

 

She said, “ I was wrong,

oh how I was wrong.

I didn't mean to do this.

I didn't mean to do this!

Please God...forgive me.”♥

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JonTalbain commented on New Feeling

04-23-2013

Interesting... take.... I wonder how we can fathom the suffering of others, though the illusion took me somewhere else. Never did I figure a murder would occur

sk8erpoet

04/24/2013

Nothing is as it seems.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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